Hello, so the topic I have to write about from the common app is:
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (150 words or fewer, 1000 character maximum).
This is my response
Choosing to be part of Key Club changed my life in multiple ways. Beginning as a regular member, I was able to connect with other students while planning fund-raising ideas at the same time. As I attended more meetings, I had the desire to be more involved. As a student experienced in web design, I chose to run for a staff position of Web Master. After being elected based off of my skill, my opportunities to contribute my creativity and leadership skills increased. Along with other staff members, I was able to plan more ideas for community service, such as volunteering at hospitals and cleaning up beaches. Through the three-day Leadership Training Conference in Monticello, I was able to make friendships with Key Clubbers beyond New York City as well as re-ignite bonds with old middle school friends that joined the club from their own respective high schools.
Should I fix or change anything? Please help! Thank you!
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (150 words or fewer, 1000 character maximum).
This is my response
Choosing to be part of Key Club changed my life in multiple ways. Beginning as a regular member, I was able to connect with other students while planning fund-raising ideas at the same time. As I attended more meetings, I had the desire to be more involved. As a student experienced in web design, I chose to run for a staff position of Web Master. After being elected based off of my skill, my opportunities to contribute my creativity and leadership skills increased. Along with other staff members, I was able to plan more ideas for community service, such as volunteering at hospitals and cleaning up beaches. Through the three-day Leadership Training Conference in Monticello, I was able to make friendships with Key Clubbers beyond New York City as well as re-ignite bonds with old middle school friends that joined the club from their own respective high schools.
Should I fix or change anything? Please help! Thank you!