chukszum /
Jan 30, 2010 #1
Hello guys . please i need some help with my admission essay for psu, below is the prompt and essay. Please i also need to reduce it to 1200 characters .
Please tell us something about yourself, your experiences, or activities that you believe would reflect positively on your ability to succeed at Penn State. This is your opportunity to tell us something about yourself that is not already reflected in your application or high school record.
To understand where I come from as a student, it is important for me to explain the challenges I have gone through as a student and as a person, but it is also important to mention my achievements especially as a leader and volunteer. I moved to California from Nigeria two years ago. While I was in Nigeria I was an indifferent student just another student and one in the crowd. Now that I have realized the importance to standout amongst the crowd I am tremendously motivated to succeed as petroleum engineer.
Two years before my graduation, I had completely lost interest in academics. My perception towards education changed terribly. Throughout the entire 2004 academic session I can clearly count the number of days I attended classes. Despite my parent's financial condition, I continued to be least bothered about my life and never paid heed to the challenges my studies gave me.
Since I moved to California and started College. I have met lots of inspiring people such as my physics Instructor Kurt Crowder who dedicated his time to brush me up academically. Late in 2008 I joined the Rotary club. It exposed me to a lot of experience both academically and morally. I participated in various activities, like visiting the Homeless Prenatal Program, providing them with food and clothing. I also volunteered at the county hospital where I was able to provide care for the sick. In June 2010 I was appointed the Rotary Club treasurer for the district. This office has helped me increase my leadership and management skills.
With these experiences come an even better responsibility and confidence. I realized that success comes from determination and persistence. Now I know that with my past experiences I would not only succeed at Penn State, but also contribute enormously to the community.
Please tell us something about yourself, your experiences, or activities that you believe would reflect positively on your ability to succeed at Penn State. This is your opportunity to tell us something about yourself that is not already reflected in your application or high school record.
To understand where I come from as a student, it is important for me to explain the challenges I have gone through as a student and as a person, but it is also important to mention my achievements especially as a leader and volunteer. I moved to California from Nigeria two years ago. While I was in Nigeria I was an indifferent student just another student and one in the crowd. Now that I have realized the importance to standout amongst the crowd I am tremendously motivated to succeed as petroleum engineer.
Two years before my graduation, I had completely lost interest in academics. My perception towards education changed terribly. Throughout the entire 2004 academic session I can clearly count the number of days I attended classes. Despite my parent's financial condition, I continued to be least bothered about my life and never paid heed to the challenges my studies gave me.
Since I moved to California and started College. I have met lots of inspiring people such as my physics Instructor Kurt Crowder who dedicated his time to brush me up academically. Late in 2008 I joined the Rotary club. It exposed me to a lot of experience both academically and morally. I participated in various activities, like visiting the Homeless Prenatal Program, providing them with food and clothing. I also volunteered at the county hospital where I was able to provide care for the sick. In June 2010 I was appointed the Rotary Club treasurer for the district. This office has helped me increase my leadership and management skills.
With these experiences come an even better responsibility and confidence. I realized that success comes from determination and persistence. Now I know that with my past experiences I would not only succeed at Penn State, but also contribute enormously to the community.