Prompt: Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (1000 character maximum).
Here is my essay:
After playing flute for the school band for two year, I decided to pick up something new and that was when I joined Guitar Ensemble. Through the two years in the ensemble, not only did I hone my guitar skills and performed 6 public concert, but also teach me the value of servant leadership. As a member of the executive committee, I was responsible for the safe-keeping of 80 guitars, each worths $800, and this taught me how to organize things and communicate with members in the most efficient way. Being in a 200-people community, I learnt how to make new friends and appreciate talents of others and indeed, this helped me to make many friends and made my duty as a leader much easier. In the preparation for the public concert Esperanza 2012, I volunteered myself to design posters and make a promotional video, the results were overwhelming. Therefore, I learnt that I have to make the best use of talents and should never hesitate to volunteer myself.
Feel free to point out any mistakes or provide some suggestions.
Thank you guys!
Here is my essay:
After playing flute for the school band for two year, I decided to pick up something new and that was when I joined Guitar Ensemble. Through the two years in the ensemble, not only did I hone my guitar skills and performed 6 public concert, but also teach me the value of servant leadership. As a member of the executive committee, I was responsible for the safe-keeping of 80 guitars, each worths $800, and this taught me how to organize things and communicate with members in the most efficient way. Being in a 200-people community, I learnt how to make new friends and appreciate talents of others and indeed, this helped me to make many friends and made my duty as a leader much easier. In the preparation for the public concert Esperanza 2012, I volunteered myself to design posters and make a promotional video, the results were overwhelming. Therefore, I learnt that I have to make the best use of talents and should never hesitate to volunteer myself.
Feel free to point out any mistakes or provide some suggestions.
Thank you guys!