los2294 /
Aug 7, 2010 #1
MY ESSAY FOR ACET, pls help me finalize and edit it,
Hi! I'd like some feedback/constructive criticism concerning my essay,
the latter part is not yet edited and finalized, i just wrote my ideas, pls help me.
its just that im in the state of procrastination, and really need a helping hand,
the question is:
" Are there any significant experiences you have had, or accomplishments you have realized,that have helped to define you as a person?"
Aristotle once said, "Knowing oneself, is the beginning of all wisdom". Thus, knowing oneself is the entity's foundation, the commencement of an individual to fully acquire the essence of life. Being acquainted to yourself is not just by merely looking at your reflection as you stand in front of a full-length mirror. But, is gradually obtained as your self, your very own mentor, teaches you every aspects of it.
As a dynamic figure enrolled in a quaint educational institution, my life as a student doesn't differ from anyone. A hectic schedule that would give havoc in your plans, loads of exams that would surely liquefy your brain, terror teachers that will make your knees tremble, and competitive classmates struggling
To sum up all of these, it is what you call pressures. Pressures are always present and are unequivocally inevitable. But if you try to widen your perspective on such thing, you'll realize it is But for me, I take it as a challenge. Besides, just like diamond, its basic form of it is carbon, but through pressure, it became diamond, and let itself shine.
Hi! I'd like some feedback/constructive criticism concerning my essay,
the latter part is not yet edited and finalized, i just wrote my ideas, pls help me.
its just that im in the state of procrastination, and really need a helping hand,
the question is:
" Are there any significant experiences you have had, or accomplishments you have realized,that have helped to define you as a person?"
Aristotle once said, "Knowing oneself, is the beginning of all wisdom". Thus, knowing oneself is the entity's foundation, the commencement of an individual to fully acquire the essence of life. Being acquainted to yourself is not just by merely looking at your reflection as you stand in front of a full-length mirror. But, is gradually obtained as your self, your very own mentor, teaches you every aspects of it.
As a dynamic figure enrolled in a quaint educational institution, my life as a student doesn't differ from anyone. A hectic schedule that would give havoc in your plans, loads of exams that would surely liquefy your brain, terror teachers that will make your knees tremble, and competitive classmates struggling
To sum up all of these, it is what you call pressures. Pressures are always present and are unequivocally inevitable. But if you try to widen your perspective on such thing, you'll realize it is But for me, I take it as a challenge. Besides, just like diamond, its basic form of it is carbon, but through pressure, it became diamond, and let itself shine.
