Need some advice quickly for essay to be mailed no later than Friday... here it is..
How will furthering my education allow me to put the credit union philosophy of "People Helping People" into action?
By furthering my education, I will obtain a well deserved and well paying job in the construction management field which I will have studied and worked very hard to achieve. By obtaining this well paying job in construction management, I will be able to deposit money into my PSECU account which will, in turn, put the credit union philosophy of "People Helping People" into action.
What will make this happen is me, and every other member of the credit union, utilizing all of the services available to each of us. This will enable the credit union to extend and offer better interest rates for savings accounts, certificates of deposit, mortgages, unsecured and secured credit lines, credit cards, and personal loans and, also, no fee checking accounts.
Also, by more and more people wanting to become members because the rates are so low, this will also allow the credit union to charge very minimal, if any, services fees. And again, this should and will attract more and more people to become members.
PSECU also leads the credit unions in that they don't have overhead expenses by having many different branches and employees working at those branches. This again, leads to the low interest rates and minimal services fees charged as they have more money to be flexible with.
So, as you can see, the People Helping People" philosophy is exactly that, "People Helping People" as you help yourself and everyone else by utilizing the credit union services which are available to members.
Now, showing this to a teacher, they said that this essay should be about me and what i will do with my education....i.e., will I volunteer my construction knowledge to habitat for humanity, etc?
Not sure if I'm on the right track...
How will furthering my education allow me to put the credit union philosophy of "People Helping People" into action?
By furthering my education, I will obtain a well deserved and well paying job in the construction management field which I will have studied and worked very hard to achieve. By obtaining this well paying job in construction management, I will be able to deposit money into my PSECU account which will, in turn, put the credit union philosophy of "People Helping People" into action.
What will make this happen is me, and every other member of the credit union, utilizing all of the services available to each of us. This will enable the credit union to extend and offer better interest rates for savings accounts, certificates of deposit, mortgages, unsecured and secured credit lines, credit cards, and personal loans and, also, no fee checking accounts.
Also, by more and more people wanting to become members because the rates are so low, this will also allow the credit union to charge very minimal, if any, services fees. And again, this should and will attract more and more people to become members.
PSECU also leads the credit unions in that they don't have overhead expenses by having many different branches and employees working at those branches. This again, leads to the low interest rates and minimal services fees charged as they have more money to be flexible with.
So, as you can see, the People Helping People" philosophy is exactly that, "People Helping People" as you help yourself and everyone else by utilizing the credit union services which are available to members.
Now, showing this to a teacher, they said that this essay should be about me and what i will do with my education....i.e., will I volunteer my construction knowledge to habitat for humanity, etc?
Not sure if I'm on the right track...
