Purdue writing supplement; Great plan of study will be substantial for my career

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What life goals will Purdue help you to achieve--and how? (Respond in 100 words or fewer.)

Given the fact that Purdue has one of the top ten engineering programs, not only will I be offered a great opportunity, but I will also be offered with an amazing preparation to any engineering career that I may be envisioning. Also, Purdue University has a great plan of study which will be substantial for my career, therefore allowing me to achieve my life goals more easily.

Leaving the engineering program behind, Purdue University will also help me encounter people from different backgrounds which will provide me with the opportunity to learn about new cultures and ideas.

In my opinion you should elaborate more on your 'life goals'. What are your life goals? After that you can write about how the university could help you to achieve it. Is it because of their cutting-edge research? Best quality faculties? Connections from the alumni?

"One of the top ten engineering programs" looks a bit vague to me, what program do you actually mean? Also, the last sentence isn't strong enough, and it doesn't give me a 'final' feeling. It's like your paragraph is still not finished yet. You may consider rephrase it.

Good luck with your application!