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Rice/Columbia career essay -- why I enjoy airports



jayelectrolosis 7 / 18  
Dec 26, 2011   #1
This for both Columbia and Rice. Prompts:

For applicants to Columbia College, please tell us what attracts you specifically to the field or fields of study that you noted in the Application Data section. If you are currently undecided, please write about any field or fields in which you may have interest at this time, but have not yet selected as a major interest.

With the understanding that the choice of academic school you indicated is not binding, explain why you are applying to that particular school of study.

Massive winged-structures descend into the skies here on a regular basis, yet airports are magical for a different reason. Hosts to a mix of nationalities and ethnicities being shuffled by a dealer known as human nature, Jackson-Hartsfield International Airport is my favorite place in the world. My passion for understanding and analyzing people's behavior makes Jackson-Hartsfield the perfect observatory. As I wait for my flight to depart, I always give myself the opportunity to sit in the amenities of my concourse and observe the mosaic of personalities shuffling through - "people watching".

My interest in sociology stems from the same passion and aptitude for empathy as does my love for airports. Majoring in sociology would enable my interest in people by reinforcing my innate empathy with knowledge. In turn, I'd able to turn my passion for people into a career where I'd be able to help others, my ultimate goal.

Vvarsha 4 / 8  
Dec 26, 2011   #2
I like your intro, but i didn't know you were talking about sociology until the end. I would definitely start out with a sentence on sociology because the college readers are going to be zipping through these essays and you need to be concise as well as creative


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