I am applying to the American University in Cairo (AUC), and they asked me to write this essay which should be 300-500 words in length. I would really appreciate it if it were read and I got some feedback. What errors did I make? How can I improve my essay? Give me suggestions. Thank you :)
Here Goes :
Road to success...
Having a bright future is probably what everyone seeks, but sometimes it can be quite challenging to acquire such thing. As a student looking for that kind of future and trying to achieve it, I found that the American University in Cairo would be a good place to start.
There were many factors that made me make that choice. One of which is the quality of education which offers the great teaching techniques of America in Cairo. The professors there are well-trained which is an essential feature in the process of choosing any university. They guide the students there to success and point them in the right direction. They have helped many famous AUC graduates become who they are now.
Having great interest in computers and technology, I thought The American University in Cairo would provide a great opportunity for me to develop this interest with its variety of majors, many of which have caught my attention, especially the Computer Engineering major. Using modern equipment and teaching methods, the AUC seemed like the best choice of all.
Being passionate about computers and programming, I've always wanted to be a successful computer engineer, so choosing the right university for this was a big step forward into accomplishing my goal. The American University in Cairo had what I was looking for, from reputation amongst a lot of people, to many well-known AUC graduates who have become famous due to their achievements, to the variety of majors to choose from...etc.
The AUC is also the region's premier English-language University which makes it recognized internationally, so if an AUC graduate had any plans to travel abroad for the purpose of studying or just starting his career, they wouldn't have much trouble with that.
What also helped increase my satisfaction, was when I first walked into the university. I could see world class quality when I took the very first look at it. Judging by the university's level and its convenient location -although not very close to where I live- I think I've made the right decision choosing it as my university as these factors definitely result in high quality education. So it would be exceptionally beneficial for me to be an "AUCian".
To cut a long story short, studying at The American University in Cairo is really the best option there is, and will be of great use to me in the future. The high-quality education system of the AUC in addition to my desire to learn from its professors, let alone its reputation, are what made choosing it easy. Hopefully, this is the university that would guide me to the road I wish to pursue; the road to success.
Here Goes :
Road to success...
Having a bright future is probably what everyone seeks, but sometimes it can be quite challenging to acquire such thing. As a student looking for that kind of future and trying to achieve it, I found that the American University in Cairo would be a good place to start.
There were many factors that made me make that choice. One of which is the quality of education which offers the great teaching techniques of America in Cairo. The professors there are well-trained which is an essential feature in the process of choosing any university. They guide the students there to success and point them in the right direction. They have helped many famous AUC graduates become who they are now.
Having great interest in computers and technology, I thought The American University in Cairo would provide a great opportunity for me to develop this interest with its variety of majors, many of which have caught my attention, especially the Computer Engineering major. Using modern equipment and teaching methods, the AUC seemed like the best choice of all.
Being passionate about computers and programming, I've always wanted to be a successful computer engineer, so choosing the right university for this was a big step forward into accomplishing my goal. The American University in Cairo had what I was looking for, from reputation amongst a lot of people, to many well-known AUC graduates who have become famous due to their achievements, to the variety of majors to choose from...etc.
The AUC is also the region's premier English-language University which makes it recognized internationally, so if an AUC graduate had any plans to travel abroad for the purpose of studying or just starting his career, they wouldn't have much trouble with that.
What also helped increase my satisfaction, was when I first walked into the university. I could see world class quality when I took the very first look at it. Judging by the university's level and its convenient location -although not very close to where I live- I think I've made the right decision choosing it as my university as these factors definitely result in high quality education. So it would be exceptionally beneficial for me to be an "AUCian".
To cut a long story short, studying at The American University in Cairo is really the best option there is, and will be of great use to me in the future. The high-quality education system of the AUC in addition to my desire to learn from its professors, let alone its reputation, are what made choosing it easy. Hopefully, this is the university that would guide me to the road I wish to pursue; the road to success.