TOPIC: Tech's motto is Progress and Service. We find that students who ultimately have a broad impact first had a significant one at home. What is your role in your immediate or extended family? And how have you seen evidence of your impact on them? (150 Words)
As the first child in my family, my have always had high expectations of me. Sometimes, I almost act as an assistant parent in my home. I am in charge of household chores such as sweeping and mopping the floors, cleaning of the bedrooms and bathrooms, assisting my mother in preparing meals for the family, babysitting my sibling and cousin and also tutoring them in their academic work.
I always try to lead by example by getting excellent academic grades and having a great personality. I always aim for the highest echelon in everything I do, mostly forfeiting pleasure and fun to become a nerd who has a passion for success. My personality and character have made me my little brother's role model and motivator. My parents are extremely proud of me and use me as an example to other kids in the neighbourhood.
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My role as the first child of my family
As the first child in my family, my have always had high expectations of me. Sometimes, I almost act as an assistant parent in my home. I am in charge of household chores such as sweeping and mopping the floors, cleaning of the bedrooms and bathrooms, assisting my mother in preparing meals for the family, babysitting my sibling and cousin and also tutoring them in their academic work.
I always try to lead by example by getting excellent academic grades and having a great personality. I always aim for the highest echelon in everything I do, mostly forfeiting pleasure and fun to become a nerd who has a passion for success. My personality and character have made me my little brother's role model and motivator. My parents are extremely proud of me and use me as an example to other kids in the neighbourhood.
Kindly help me revise this essay, thank you