Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (1000 character maximum)
Hope you can point out the grammar mistakes and anywhere awkward.
And did I state my experience clearly? Enough Details? Did I explain how the experience promoted me?
I was a DJ in the school broadcasting station hosting the programme about the new discoveries in science and technology field.The lunch hour when I shared the latest discoveries with the whole school was really an exciting moment.Moreover,I broadcast in many school activities such as the school sport meeting and the swimming games.As an officer of the school broadcasting station,I also participatezd in organizing the school singing contest.Although I met many unexpected difficulties when arranging the show list and the venue,these barriers did not stop me from organizing an amazing contest,and even made me stronger.The broadcasting work shaped me an outgoing and confident girl.Most importantly,the painstaking endeavors cultivated my capabilities not only in broadcasting but also in the leadership and organizing ability.Now I have new DJs take over the programme,but the memory as a DJ will inspire me to promote and challenge myself for my whole life.
Hope you can point out the grammar mistakes and anywhere awkward.
And did I state my experience clearly? Enough Details? Did I explain how the experience promoted me?
I was a DJ in the school broadcasting station hosting the programme about the new discoveries in science and technology field.The lunch hour when I shared the latest discoveries with the whole school was really an exciting moment.Moreover,I broadcast in many school activities such as the school sport meeting and the swimming games.As an officer of the school broadcasting station,I also participatezd in organizing the school singing contest.Although I met many unexpected difficulties when arranging the show list and the venue,these barriers did not stop me from organizing an amazing contest,and even made me stronger.The broadcasting work shaped me an outgoing and confident girl.Most importantly,the painstaking endeavors cultivated my capabilities not only in broadcasting but also in the leadership and organizing ability.Now I have new DJs take over the programme,but the memory as a DJ will inspire me to promote and challenge myself for my whole life.