Prompt:
How did you first learn of Smith College and why are you applying (100 words)
Hi, do you think the first version is not very specific? I feel that I can use this why-essay to apply for any women's college, so I add some specific programs in the second version. What do you think? And advices are welcomed!
"To virtue, to knowledge." Smith's motto reverberated in my mind. "Yes, this is where I am going, a place where the best education for women is provided, a place where my true potential can be awakened, a place where ideas will never end." At Smith, I want to pursue my love for engineering, but I also want to experience the beauty of art. Smith will provide me with personal attention, role models, intellectual discourse, and academic challenges. Smith College will serve as a stepping-stone in my life, leading me to make a difference in the world.( first version)
From a very young age, I have cherished and persued virtue and knowledge.That is why I found Smith, a place where social responsibility is greatly promoted, where best education for women is provided. I want to join in the Green Team, to folster sustainability at Smith. I want to pusue my love for science and challenge myself in the Picker Engineering Program, but I also want to experience the beauty of art in the Smith College Museum of Art. Providing me with personal attention,academic challenges,and successful role models, Smith College will serve as a stepping-stone, leading me to make a difference in the world. (second Version)
How did you first learn of Smith College and why are you applying (100 words)
Hi, do you think the first version is not very specific? I feel that I can use this why-essay to apply for any women's college, so I add some specific programs in the second version. What do you think? And advices are welcomed!
"To virtue, to knowledge." Smith's motto reverberated in my mind. "Yes, this is where I am going, a place where the best education for women is provided, a place where my true potential can be awakened, a place where ideas will never end." At Smith, I want to pursue my love for engineering, but I also want to experience the beauty of art. Smith will provide me with personal attention, role models, intellectual discourse, and academic challenges. Smith College will serve as a stepping-stone in my life, leading me to make a difference in the world.( first version)
From a very young age, I have cherished and persued virtue and knowledge.That is why I found Smith, a place where social responsibility is greatly promoted, where best education for women is provided. I want to join in the Green Team, to folster sustainability at Smith. I want to pusue my love for science and challenge myself in the Picker Engineering Program, but I also want to experience the beauty of art in the Smith College Museum of Art. Providing me with personal attention,academic challenges,and successful role models, Smith College will serve as a stepping-stone, leading me to make a difference in the world. (second Version)