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dorbaruch 3 / 6  
Dec 31, 2013   #1
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences. (150 word limit.)
During my army service I experience considerable pressure; My work demands profound thought, leaving no error margin. My work hours tend to be very long, from sunrise to sunset, during which I scarcely leave my chair. With time, I was eventually able to find refuge in exercise.

During my workouts I find myself detached from all else. No commanders, family or friends. Without my cellphone or computer to distract me. This is my time during the day, a time when I can concentrate and reflect on recent events. Music alone echoes, in tandem with the rhythm of my pulse and rapid respiration. Each press of weights sheds the day's worries; every breath regulates thoughts. Each drop of sweat cleanses me of the unending daily toil. At the end of my exhausting workout I feel ready to cope with the new day to come.

Name your favorite books, authors, films, and/or musical artists.
Books: Harry Potter (I read it more times than I'd like to admit), The Dice Man, Memoirs Of a Geisha, Eragon. Movies: Matrix, Lord of the Rings, Before Sunrise and Before Sunset, Memento, Silver Linings Playbook. Musical artists: Michelle Branch, Avril Lavigne, Shlomo Artzi.

What historical moment or event do you wish you could have witnessed? (50 word limit.)
As a Jew living in Israel, the declaration of independence on May 15, 1948 was a founding event that I would have liked to have witnessed, as thousands of Jews gathered around David Ben-Gurion at a moment symbolizing the end of the 2000 years of exile for the Jewish people.

What five words best describe you?
Sensitive, motivated, honest, loyal, friend

Stanford students possess an intellectual vitality. Reflect on an idea or experience that has been important to your intellectual development. (250 word limit.)
"Righty tighty, lefty loosey"; This was the high school's robotics team first lesson to be learned, Immediately followed by many more comprehensive and deep explanations: "This is a screw, it is used to join things, and this is a drill, use it when you want to drill holes."

The purpose of the team was to construct a robot that would represent the school in the FIRST robotics competition. In my first year in the team which was also the year the team was established, the competition task was to construct a robot that collects and shoots balls into baskets that would be dragged by robots on the opposing teams. As head of the design team, I was afraid this task was near impossible. I felt helpless, since we lacked any experience or knowledge in robotics, without professional guidance, tools, and resources.

Despite all the difficulties, we didn't give up. The robotics room became a second home for us. An endless number of hours of work and research, discussions and disagreements finally led to great success - the construction of the robot was completed in time, and our design led to our winning second place in the national competition.

This experience proved to me that perseverance and hard work can overcome any obstacle standing in our way. Today it doesn't matter how big, unknown or even near impossible the task seems I will not refrain from trying to complete it, since with sufficient willpower, everything is within reach.

virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate -- and us -- know you better. (250 word limit.)

Dear Future Roommate,
Something many discover only upon profound acquaintance is that I cry in films.
I guess it does not seem like much of a confession to make, but you would probably be more surprised if you ever saw me in person.

I am a big guy. 6'2", 220 pounds in weight, buzz cut, and my frequent visits to the gym have resulted in a build comparable to Mike Tyson's. My face is naturally stoic, possibly leading innocent bystanders to think that I'm concocting a cruel scheme.

Yet, accompany me to a heart-wrenching movie and you will quickly see that stoic expression melt. But do not interpret my crying as a weakness. I cry in movies because I emote in cinematic identification and experience the scenes to their uttermost. I am completely the silver screen protagonist, adhering to the characters at each phase and stage, rejoicing in their big victories, quivering as they tremble in fear, and when they experience a big loss or a personal tragedy - I cry with them.

And I pledge to accompany you as an especially loyal friend who is always sensitive to your state. Happy as you are, sympathetic to your difficulties and available for you about any matter. A friend whom you may share the most personal dilemmas and issues with, and who will always be attentive and ready to advise, devoid of any criticism.

So prepare a bag of popcorn, a bundle of Kleenex, and flick on the saddest flick you have.

What matters to you, and why? (250 word limit.)
It matters to me to be different.
In my society our life's course is predictable. Our surroundings have set expectations regarding our future.
- At the age of 18 after graduation, we are expected to serve in a top military unit.
- By age 21 we work one year to save up money for a challenging after-service trip abroad.
- At 23, we study in one of the Israeli universities to get an academic education which will enable us to properly support our future family.
- By 27, the expectation is clear: establish a career, start a family and begin to accumulate assets.
This is how our life's 'ladder' is built, with every rung planned according to a certain ideal and standard. We are expected to live a life filled with aspirations limited to personal success and desire to influence our immediate environment alone.

I do not wish to live this way.
My father always told me to aspire to live my life differently. A man's aspirations should not be resumed to his private success and wealth. He should aspire to leave his mark on this planet.

His words echoed in my mind and now that I have reached the point where I must decide what to do with my life, they became a main guideline in my plans. I want my path to be non-similar to others'. I wish to dream the biggest, to influence as many lives possible, and to leave my personal mark on this world.

boston1002 2 / 19  
Dec 31, 2013   #2
Isn't "friend" a noun?
OP dorbaruch 3 / 6  
Dec 31, 2013   #3
yeah, but cant you use it to describe someone?
English is not my native language, so maybe I got it wrong..
rianhawaiian 4 / 17  
Jan 1, 2014   #4
I love that you used friend actually. I feel like everyone will use adjectives to describe themselves and a noun like friend connotes so many more things in one word than an adjective could.


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