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Starting a music club at my school - Waterloo AIF question #2 - Community Involvement



PramodChavali 4 / -  
Oct 12, 2025   #1
My response for the AIF question #2 for the University of Waterloo. Any advice appreciated!

2. Briefly describe a group, organization, or community that you have been involved in, are a member of, and/or have contributed to. What contributions have you made as a member of this group? Were you able to lead, influence others, and/or influence decisions for the good of the group and its goals? How has your involvement helped make this community better? (150-word limit)

In Grade 10, I joined a guitar ensemble focused on improvisation and taking solos. The group significantly helped me develop my improvisation skills and musicianship. After it ended, I wanted to help others in the same way. I started the Jam Club at my school, a club open to any and all musicians. Every meeting involves us playing music with opportunities for improvisation. I lead the club by conducting the group, making sheet music each week, and fostering an environment where people feel comfortable to push themselves, even if they make mistakes. After a while, I made the impact I was hoping to achieve. People who were previously shy to improvise, now played out with confidence, without fear of making mistakes. By leading the club, I have helped people improve their skills by allowing them to push themselves in a casual setting, strengthening the confidence in the school's music department.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15921  
Oct 12, 2025   #2
This leadership statement is too self focused. There is a lack of teamwork, consideration of the needs of the team, resolving situations that affect the team, and engaging the team in a group effort to resolve any issues. These are all considerations and situations where you would have been able to show several facets of your leadership skills and how you practice inclusiveness as a leader. The events and abilities you describe above would have been more effective, had you been able to establish more of the groundwork of the group. How and why were you chosen as the leader? Did you have assistants? How did you inspire the team towards specific shared goals? What skills did the obstacles help you develop as a leader?


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