Personal Statement
At Rotman Commerce, we are seeking students from diverse backgrounds who possess a strong academic record and have an interest in, and enthusiasm for, the world of commerce. Just as importantly, however, we aim to attract students who have demonstrated extra-curricular involvement that emphasizes leadership, creativity, teamwork, and community building. We believe that these combined qualities are key to ensuring one's overall success in our program.
Instructions:
In a 300-word paper, please describe how your extracurricular activities and leadership experience have prepared you to be an active contributor to, and engaged participant in, the Rotman Commerce community.
You may type your text and then paste it in the available box below (maximum 300 words)
Thomas Edison said: "Genius is 99% perspiration and 1% inspiration". I say success is the same. Success comes from the sweat and tears of hard work, experience and initiative. My inspiration started when I joined the Volunteers in Power (VIP) club with the sole desire to complete my community-service hours. The experience I gained from organizing fundraisers, charity events and promotions surprisingly triggered interest. As events flew by, I aspired more than community-service hours; I aspired to lead. As the current Communications/External Affairs executive for VIP, working with...
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At Rotman Commerce, we are seeking students from diverse backgrounds who possess a strong academic record and have an interest in, and enthusiasm for, the world of commerce. Just as importantly, however, we aim to attract students who have demonstrated extra-curricular involvement that emphasizes leadership, creativity, teamwork, and community building. We believe that these combined qualities are key to ensuring one's overall success in our program.
Instructions:
In a 300-word paper, please describe how your extracurricular activities and leadership experience have prepared you to be an active contributor to, and engaged participant in, the Rotman Commerce community.
You may type your text and then paste it in the available box below (maximum 300 words)
Thomas Edison said: "Genius is 99% perspiration and 1% inspiration". I say success is the same. Success comes from the sweat and tears of hard work, experience and initiative. My inspiration started when I joined the Volunteers in Power (VIP) club with the sole desire to complete my community-service hours. The experience I gained from organizing fundraisers, charity events and promotions surprisingly triggered interest. As events flew by, I aspired more than community-service hours; I aspired to lead. As the current Communications/External Affairs executive for VIP, working with...
Please be as critical as possbile :) Currently, I am at 313 words; need to cut this down to 300.
Do you think I have answered the question correctly?