This is my admission short paragraphs, pls don;t feel hesitate to comment, thanks!
1. Engineer interest and goals- interest, ability, exposure to engineering
Engineer brings revolutionary changes to our society. It becomes everyday needs to human beings. For example, almost everyone in the world carries an Apple product. However, it takes hundreds of Engineer's mind to create a fancy electronic. Every day, we walk through buildings, drive on bridges, but not many of us think the work behind these architects. In fact, if bridges, buildings can easily collapse, then everyone's life will be in danger. Therefore, civil engineers are here to ensure everyone's safety,
Ever since I was a child, my uncle, a civil engineer who is in charge of one of --'s largest water dam projects, constantly took me to the dam locations, explained the inspections that have to be done before starting the project, and the process of building the dam. As a child, I was fascinated, and introduced to the world of engineers. In fact, the unique process behind it sparks my passion and made me to dream to become a civil engineer. I held this keen interest throughout my life.
Within my spare time, besides playing sports, I drew pictures, and make videos for game players. In the process of drawing and making, it has not only helped me to gain experience in design, but it teaches me to have patience when I struggle, and valuable team work skills, from which I can always separate a project by looking at each group member's strength and weakness. Even though I had to stop doing these due to my school works, and extracurricular activities, I believe these experiences will definitely help me in the future.
2. Educational goals, interest in chosen program, and reason for choosing the university.
In becoming a successful civil engineer is one of my biggest goals. However, the world of engineer only needs those who have knowledge, passionate, and great perseverance. In preparing to achieve this goal, I took math, science to put myself on to the right path. In addition, high academic achievements are essential to enter a university that will provide precious opportunities, and experiences to widen my knowledge in civil engineering in order to get myself prepared. Therefore, I firmly believe University of _____'s unique co-op program, and high quality of education will assist me on the path to my dream.
Engineers bring revolutionary changes to our society. It becomesEngineering is the basis of many everyday needs.to human beings.
For example, almost everyone in the world carries an Apple product.
Not a fact, use a better example.
However,it takeshundreds of engineersmind tomust collaborate to create a fancy electronics . Every day, we walk through buildings and drive on bridges, but not many of us think thatthe work behind these were designed by architects.
Ever since I was a child, my uncle, a civil engineer who is in charge of one of --'s largest water dam projects, constantly took me to the dam locations, explained the inspections that have to be done before starting the project, and the process of building the dam.
This sentence is very long, you may want to create a couple shorter sentences out of this one.
In fact, the unique process behind it sparks my passion and made me to dreammy goal is to become a civil engineer.
WithinDuring my spare time, besides playing sports, I drawpictures and make videos for game players.
