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Prompt- What work of art, music, science, mathematics, or literature has surprised, unsettled, or challenged you, and in what way?
It was late at night and my family was watching the news. As usual, I sat on the sofa concerned about how I could conquer the next level in Super Mario. I rarely worried myself with the perplexing world of grown-ups; but this time, it was different. After the usual news report, a sixty-minute program was featured focusing on the latest discoveries in neuroscience. Being deeply passionate and enthusiastic about science, I quickly directed my attention to the TV. For the first time, I felt how it is like to be in love. I was not only captivated by the beauty and complexity of the brain, but also stimulated by the challenging idea that human perception is an amalgamation of visual and auditory information.
I believed that our understanding of our environment is only visual-based. Hearing that auditory information was equally important was unsettling, but yet gave me the motivation to explore the topic. I read The Tell-Tale Brain written by neuroscientist V. S. Ramachandran, which further substantiated the claim made in the program. To reach an accurate understanding, I decided to conduct an experiment myself. With the help of my psychology teacher, I designed an experiment to test human perception. The results refuted my view and I finally had sufficient proof to correct my mistaken belief. The process of designing the experiment, as a whole, marked perhaps the best moments of my life. By the end of this project, I had discovered my innermost desire, which is studying and conducting research in neuroscience.
Prompt- What work of art, music, science, mathematics, or literature has surprised, unsettled, or challenged you, and in what way?
It was late at night and my family was watching the news. As usual, I sat on the sofa concerned about how I could conquer the next level in Super Mario. I rarely worried myself with the perplexing world of grown-ups; but this time, it was different. After the usual news report, a sixty-minute program was featured focusing on the latest discoveries in neuroscience. Being deeply passionate and enthusiastic about science, I quickly directed my attention to the TV. For the first time, I felt how it is like to be in love. I was not only captivated by the beauty and complexity of the brain, but also stimulated by the challenging idea that human perception is an amalgamation of visual and auditory information.
I believed that our understanding of our environment is only visual-based. Hearing that auditory information was equally important was unsettling, but yet gave me the motivation to explore the topic. I read The Tell-Tale Brain written by neuroscientist V. S. Ramachandran, which further substantiated the claim made in the program. To reach an accurate understanding, I decided to conduct an experiment myself. With the help of my psychology teacher, I designed an experiment to test human perception. The results refuted my view and I finally had sufficient proof to correct my mistaken belief. The process of designing the experiment, as a whole, marked perhaps the best moments of my life. By the end of this project, I had discovered my innermost desire, which is studying and conducting research in neuroscience.