Hello My name is Blanca, I am originally from Mexico, and I am trying to finish a BSN in nursing. I need help with grammer and writing, will essayforum be able to help and how is my question?
Is this like a feeling out post? Post your essay and if it doesn't look like the word processor jumbled the formatting to make for an unintelligible mess -- to your lament -- you will probably receive quality feedback. Nursing is a good profession that pays decently and people don't really know about it. Plus, there's a huge shortage. Heck, I'd work as a male nurse if my job was dreary and the opportunities for advancement were slim to none (many people).
Anyway, post your rough draft and at worst, you should get a few comments telling what's wrong with your essay and how to possibly fix it. Your question was excellent, except the comma should be a semi-colon.
I am always surprised when 21st century people still speak in terms of a "male nurse," as if that might be something unusual. We don't say male orderly or male physician... male taxi cab driver.
