This is my penn state personal statement, apparently they want something under 1200 characters and my actual essay is way over so i whipped this up quick, can you guys lemme know if theres any corrections needing to be made. thanks!
Throughout my high school career I have faced many struggles and encountered many hindrances. And through all my problems I have always turned to basketball to help clear my head so I could properly analyze my situations. Which is why my summer basketball tournament is where I am most involved as one of the team captains. The summer tournament is something my church is associated with, so one of our main goals as a team is to minister to those who are not Christian through basketball. We hold rigorous practices every week over the course of the summer, and we are very strict in order to make sure that the players must attend church in order to play in games. But after the season is over a good majority of our players willingly come to church, which we believe to be a result of our dedication to each player individually. My involvement in this league has helped change a number of individuals, but I believe that it has changed me the most. All the different people I met during this league have truly helped me to diversify my view on life so now I can see things through the perspectives of different people.
Throughout my high school career I have faced many struggles and encountered many hindrances. And through all my problems I have always turned to basketball to help clear my head so I could properly analyze my situations. Which is why my summer basketball tournament is where I am most involved as one of the team captains. The summer tournament is something my church is associated with, so one of our main goals as a team is to minister to those who are not Christian through basketball. We hold rigorous practices every week over the course of the summer, and we are very strict in order to make sure that the players must attend church in order to play in games. But after the season is over a good majority of our players willingly come to church, which we believe to be a result of our dedication to each player individually. My involvement in this league has helped change a number of individuals, but I believe that it has changed me the most. All the different people I met during this league have truly helped me to diversify my view on life so now I can see things through the perspectives of different people.
