HI, I'm applying to the University of Arizona and I'm interested in majoring under Journalism (possibly print but not necessarily focusing in sports). How can I begin the PS with the fact that I rose up in my journalism class by starting off as a reporter, then moving up as sports editor to, eventually being Editor-in-Chief and mention the red flags like: my grades dropping (which that part is true)?
Turning point of my life began with my interest in Journalism U of A PS
Your question is incomplete english. Are you asking if that is a good plan/outline? Can you add what the requirements are for the statement.
Personally, I don't think that is a good plan because you other application materials should highlight that you were editor in chief... plus you wouldn't want to talk about bad grades.
The personal statement is like a face to face interview (since you most likely will not get a real face to face interview), with the question you are presented with being, who are you?
Don't necessarily tell what you did alone. Tell why you chose to be a reporter in high school. I think the best thing to do is to limit your timeline of events down. Was there a pivotal moment for you, perhaps what landed you editor in chief? You want to be a reporter right, so think like you're profiling yourself. What should we know about you, in an interesting fashion. Demonstrate your abilities, interests, with a (true) story, and your reflections on it.
Personally, I don't think that is a good plan because you other application materials should highlight that you were editor in chief... plus you wouldn't want to talk about bad grades.
The personal statement is like a face to face interview (since you most likely will not get a real face to face interview), with the question you are presented with being, who are you?
Don't necessarily tell what you did alone. Tell why you chose to be a reporter in high school. I think the best thing to do is to limit your timeline of events down. Was there a pivotal moment for you, perhaps what landed you editor in chief? You want to be a reporter right, so think like you're profiling yourself. What should we know about you, in an interesting fashion. Demonstrate your abilities, interests, with a (true) story, and your reflections on it.
You could give it a kind of article-y feel, like you're doing a report on yourself (keep it formatted like an essay, though; no gimmicks!) If you do mention your grades, which you should (especially if you want to show that you've been working hard to improve them because of a changed mindset, or if something happened to make you lose your focus), do it in the context of "This happened, but I learned from it and am moving on." I like the idea of you showing your growth by describing how you started off in a fairly humble position and worked your way up to editor-in-chief. Describe how each position was different and what you learned from them.
Best of luck!
Best of luck!
Thank you very much both of you! These are great suggestions that you've given me.
Hi again. I finished typing up a version of my personal statement and I'd like to get feedback on what you think and what I should change. I decided to talk about the experience I had in my journalism class over the past 3 years. It may be a bit, strange with some points not fully explained but I hope the rest isn't as bad. Thank you very much for your replies.
Here is the prompt for the University of Arizona.
A personal statement is our best means of getting to know you and your best means of putting your academic performance and activities in the context of your life. There are no "wrong" answers. When you write your personal statement, tell us about those aspects of your life that are not evident from your academic record. Because personal statements are brief, they usually focus on one aspect of a student's life. For example, you could focus on a character-defining moment, a cultural awareness, a challenge faced, family background or cultural heritage, individual talents, academic commitment, or extracurricular activities. Tell us what you would like us to know about you in considering you for admission and/or scholarships.
Jovany Leon,
A turning point in my academic life took place in my sophomore year, when I signed up for journalism class. My interest in journalism began during 8th grade, although I was not as serious about it as I am now. During that time, my main focus in journalism was sports.
My first reaction to being a reporter assigned to reporting for sports was exhilarating, yet nerve-wracking. I enjoyed attending the various soccer matches, basketball games, and track meets, but getting there was a hassle, and interviewing was new to me. To make the experience more memorable, during that year another reporter and I had a friendly competition to see who could write the best reports and we competes for which stories would be published in the current issue. All of this helped my analytical and communication skills to flourish.
Going into my junior year, I had lost interest in covering sports, and ironically I was promoted to Sports Editor for the work and effort that I put in for the newspaper last year. The new school year felt weird because many of the staff graduated or did not return for various reasons. I continued to be the sports editor, but I decided to seek other areas that broadened my sense of the world around me and which ultimately helped me mature as a reporter, and as a person. I sought to work on stories that had an impact on students.
I started to form ideas for stories from topics in my AP History and English classes. For example, my AP History teacher talked about the phenomenon that is product placement. I wrote an opinion piece which I hoped would make my fellow students aware of covert advertising in their favorite television programming. From there, I began to feel more comfortable about expanding my interest and developing them into stories and opinion pieces. With this renewed confidence, I was motivated to report on the situation that was going on in Arizona. The story that was significant was the banning of cultural texts in the Tucson school district. Reporting on this story was significant because some of the books that were on banned list, were books that my friends and I read in classes like House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros and The Tempest by William Shakespeare
In essence, journalism gave me my "voice." It helped me to uncover the nuances of what I was learning. I felt empowered to express my perspective of the world and have my peers read it. This year as editor-in-chief, in a managing position, I continued to mature. I have learned to assert my authority with my staff and compromise with my advisor and school administration. I've learned what liability means and I've learned that networking with people who can help me out is important. I hope to use these skills to develop a career in journalism =, maybe even being a foreign correspondent someday.
Here is the prompt for the University of Arizona.
A personal statement is our best means of getting to know you and your best means of putting your academic performance and activities in the context of your life. There are no "wrong" answers. When you write your personal statement, tell us about those aspects of your life that are not evident from your academic record. Because personal statements are brief, they usually focus on one aspect of a student's life. For example, you could focus on a character-defining moment, a cultural awareness, a challenge faced, family background or cultural heritage, individual talents, academic commitment, or extracurricular activities. Tell us what you would like us to know about you in considering you for admission and/or scholarships.
Jovany Leon,
A turning point in my academic life took place in my sophomore year, when I signed up for journalism class. My interest in journalism began during 8th grade, although I was not as serious about it as I am now. During that time, my main focus in journalism was sports.
My first reaction to being a reporter assigned to reporting for sports was exhilarating, yet nerve-wracking. I enjoyed attending the various soccer matches, basketball games, and track meets, but getting there was a hassle, and interviewing was new to me. To make the experience more memorable, during that year another reporter and I had a friendly competition to see who could write the best reports and we competes for which stories would be published in the current issue. All of this helped my analytical and communication skills to flourish.
Going into my junior year, I had lost interest in covering sports, and ironically I was promoted to Sports Editor for the work and effort that I put in for the newspaper last year. The new school year felt weird because many of the staff graduated or did not return for various reasons. I continued to be the sports editor, but I decided to seek other areas that broadened my sense of the world around me and which ultimately helped me mature as a reporter, and as a person. I sought to work on stories that had an impact on students.
I started to form ideas for stories from topics in my AP History and English classes. For example, my AP History teacher talked about the phenomenon that is product placement. I wrote an opinion piece which I hoped would make my fellow students aware of covert advertising in their favorite television programming. From there, I began to feel more comfortable about expanding my interest and developing them into stories and opinion pieces. With this renewed confidence, I was motivated to report on the situation that was going on in Arizona. The story that was significant was the banning of cultural texts in the Tucson school district. Reporting on this story was significant because some of the books that were on banned list, were books that my friends and I read in classes like House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros and The Tempest by William Shakespeare
In essence, journalism gave me my "voice." It helped me to uncover the nuances of what I was learning. I felt empowered to express my perspective of the world and have my peers read it. This year as editor-in-chief, in a managing position, I continued to mature. I have learned to assert my authority with my staff and compromise with my advisor and school administration. I've learned what liability means and I've learned that networking with people who can help me out is important. I hope to use these skills to develop a career in journalism =, maybe even being a foreign correspondent someday.
