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Why go to university? A great environment for us to learn and grow up.



Water Buffalo 1 / -  
Jun 27, 2015   #1
Why go to university?

In today's society, university has become the best choice of many students after graduating because of its enomous advantages. Firstly, it is certainly that one of the core aims of university is to secure a better job. In truth, futher education enables us to have a great deal of deep knowledge, new experience and career preparation. In this way, university offers us the future career prospects without any worries. Secondly, it also brings to us other clearly futher benefits for individual and society. It is believed that the independence of living away from home helps us develop better social skills, raise our maturity and confidence. Society, as a result, becomes dramatically advanced and dynamic. In summary, university could be described as a great environment for us to learn and grow up.

wadpk 1 / 5  
Jun 27, 2015   #2
From my view, I think using "Show, don't tell" rule can help you to improve your essay, that's mean you could tell more about an example, your personal experience for each reason you have in your essay. And you can add more reasons to contrast yours, for example "why not going to the University is bad". And the last is I think increasing your word count is also a good point. Good luck!


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