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'the vast terrains of China' - Colgate (Where would you travel and why?)



anonymous124 4 / 6  
Jan 15, 2012   #1
If given the opportunity, I would go to the traditional villages of China. The medieval Chinese culture and lifestyle interests me. Their simplistic approach to life as well as the unique and colorful cultural values also appeals to me. I have been limited to experiencing the Chinese way of life only through movies, books and articles, but have never gotten a chance to experience it in real.

I would love to taste their delectable cuisines; immerse myself in the numerous cultural rituals; gain knowledge of the ancient custom of martial arts and learn the secret to peace of mind, body and soul.

I think that my intense desire to delve in the vast terrains of China arises due to my own characteristics. I have always believed in leading a simple lifestyle. My humble personality along with my constant attempt for exploration of my soul has made it easier to relate to the Chinese mores. I believe I will be in a better position to learn the Chinese beliefs by experiencing it closely.

Regardless of the reasons, I believe that experiencing the Chinese way of life will make me a better individual. I am also assured that I can contribute to my community by sharing the valuable information that I will acquire.

cordyceps 3 / 11  
Jan 15, 2012   #2
The medieval Chinese culture and lifestyle interests me. Their simplistic approach to life as well as the unique and colorful cultural values also appeals to me.

The medieval Chinese culture and their simplistic approach to life (same as lifestyle?) as well as the unique and colorful cultural values truly appeals to me.

but have never gotten a chance to experience it in real life.

arises from to my own characteristics.

attempt to explore my soul
phhai 7 / 25  
Jan 15, 2012   #3
My humble personality along with my constant attempt for exploration of my soul has made it easier to relate to the Chinese mores
It simply does not sounds humble when you say you r humble :-|
Well it was well elaborated
Since there are many things to do in China, I would suggest you focus on 1 significant 1 to be specific about, rather than write a long sentence like this

I would love to taste their delectable cuisines; immerse myself in the numerous cultural rituals; gain knowledge of the ancient custom of martial arts and learn the secret to peace of mind, body and soul.

I'd be glad if you look at mine
OP anonymous124 4 / 6  
Jan 15, 2012   #4
Thank You for all the suggestions @phhai and @cordyceps.
Really appreciate it.


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