Prompt:
Submit your essay (strongly encouraged).
The essay is an important part of your application. It assists the University in learning about you as an individual, independent of your academic grade point average, test scores, and other objective data. Your essay should be no longer than 500 words.
- For almost one hundred years, the Latin words, "Vires, Artes, Mores" have been the guiding philosophy behind Florida State University. Vires signifies strength of all kinds - moral, physical, and intellectual; Artes alludes to the beauty of intellectual pursuits as exemplified in skill, craft, or art; and Mores refers to character, custom, or tradition. Describe how one or more of the values embodied in these concepts are reflected in your life.
-My essay is 13 words to long, if you could please help me cut it down to 500 words.
The values found in the words Vires, Artes, and Mores play an important role in my life from helping me to become a more responsible and respectable individual, to giving me the will and courage to strive for my dreams. I have always tried my best so I could reach my goals, but also I have tried to lead a good example for others to follow. However, all these qualities did not come easily; rather they developed after a lot of hard work and experience.
When I graduated from eighth grade to start my high school career, my dad offered me an incredible opportunity, one that I was quite nervous about. He purposed that I travel with him over summer break to work with him at his souvenir job with NASCAR. It seemed to be a stretch for a shy person like me to travel around the country and meet thousands of different people every weekend, but having never been the one to back down from a challenge, I went. Arriving at five-thirty in the morning on my first day, I helped open-up the hauler, while getting to know the five other people I would be working alongside for the next eight weeks. Once opened the job quickly became a test of strength and endurance as I waited on one costumer after another, not getting a break until race-time, and knowing I would be right back there the next day. But after this first day I felt I had gained some valuable information. First, I found that to be a successful sales person, I had to be fast. Second, I discovered that the most important part of the job was establishing a good connection with the costumer. When waiting on a person, I needed to be able to talk to them and see what they were looking for, and then help them find it. It became a great memory with great friends, and I have gladly done it every summer since.
Now, another area where I have grown is in media art, especially in painting and scratchboard. When I was younger I knew I had potential when I won first place for my mixed media drawing at a local festival, but during high school I really started to put more effort into my work, taking more challenging courses like Portfolio. My most successful pieces have been about animals, which I have always admired since I was a child. My artwork has enabled me to understand animals on a different level and has become part of my inspiration on being a zoologist. The rest of my inspiration has come from growing up with animals and reaching out to help the others at humane societies.
Through all of these experiences I have come to develop the communication skills, the creative skills, and the determination that are required to become a zoologist. On becoming one I hope to travel around the world, seeing diverse cultures and discovering more about the secrets that animal's hold, in hope to open more doors for our world and future generations.
Submit your essay (strongly encouraged).
The essay is an important part of your application. It assists the University in learning about you as an individual, independent of your academic grade point average, test scores, and other objective data. Your essay should be no longer than 500 words.
- For almost one hundred years, the Latin words, "Vires, Artes, Mores" have been the guiding philosophy behind Florida State University. Vires signifies strength of all kinds - moral, physical, and intellectual; Artes alludes to the beauty of intellectual pursuits as exemplified in skill, craft, or art; and Mores refers to character, custom, or tradition. Describe how one or more of the values embodied in these concepts are reflected in your life.
-My essay is 13 words to long, if you could please help me cut it down to 500 words.
The values found in the words Vires, Artes, and Mores play an important role in my life from helping me to become a more responsible and respectable individual, to giving me the will and courage to strive for my dreams. I have always tried my best so I could reach my goals, but also I have tried to lead a good example for others to follow. However, all these qualities did not come easily; rather they developed after a lot of hard work and experience.
When I graduated from eighth grade to start my high school career, my dad offered me an incredible opportunity, one that I was quite nervous about. He purposed that I travel with him over summer break to work with him at his souvenir job with NASCAR. It seemed to be a stretch for a shy person like me to travel around the country and meet thousands of different people every weekend, but having never been the one to back down from a challenge, I went. Arriving at five-thirty in the morning on my first day, I helped open-up the hauler, while getting to know the five other people I would be working alongside for the next eight weeks. Once opened the job quickly became a test of strength and endurance as I waited on one costumer after another, not getting a break until race-time, and knowing I would be right back there the next day. But after this first day I felt I had gained some valuable information. First, I found that to be a successful sales person, I had to be fast. Second, I discovered that the most important part of the job was establishing a good connection with the costumer. When waiting on a person, I needed to be able to talk to them and see what they were looking for, and then help them find it. It became a great memory with great friends, and I have gladly done it every summer since.
Now, another area where I have grown is in media art, especially in painting and scratchboard. When I was younger I knew I had potential when I won first place for my mixed media drawing at a local festival, but during high school I really started to put more effort into my work, taking more challenging courses like Portfolio. My most successful pieces have been about animals, which I have always admired since I was a child. My artwork has enabled me to understand animals on a different level and has become part of my inspiration on being a zoologist. The rest of my inspiration has come from growing up with animals and reaching out to help the others at humane societies.
Through all of these experiences I have come to develop the communication skills, the creative skills, and the determination that are required to become a zoologist. On becoming one I hope to travel around the world, seeing diverse cultures and discovering more about the secrets that animal's hold, in hope to open more doors for our world and future generations.