Waterloo AIF, computational and financial management

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QUESTION 1: REASONS FOR CHOOSING YOUR PROGRAM AND WATERLOO (*Required)
Please tell us about your educational goals, your interest in your chosen program(s), and your reasons for applying to the University of Waterloo. If you have applied to more than one program please discuss your interest in each program. (900 character limit)

I aspire to make a commendable contribution in the sectors of technology and finance by facing and interpreting complex challenges, utilizing algorithms resulting in people's life being more efficient and convenient and to also expand my knowledge of programming and finance to achieve my full potential in these areas. My heart has set out on University of Waterloo because of the skills that I will develop through this course will benefit me more than any other school due to the Waterloo's extensive co-op program which fosters professional development from day one, adding a competitive advantage in me after graduation. This would make me get much closer to my educational goal by already giving me the knowledge of the complex problems in the real world which I will be ready to counter through the skills I would have evolved through the program, and that just makes University of Waterloo the dream university for me.

Focus on the coop program. Show that you are familiar with the opportunities the program provides the students, which cannot be found at other universities. Remember that the prompt is a trick question. The reviewer wants to know that you have an academic agenda that can be addressed by the existing Waterloo programs. Try to look into the actual ways that you can learn through the coop program. It is important to provide an actual outline of how you would participate in the program. That way the reviewer will realize the depths by which you have ambitioned to attend the university. It is all about your familiarity with the university offerings that will help you achieve the dream. Be specific, this response is too general in reference for the reviewer to be impressed.