celestialxx 1 / - Sep 21, 2008 #1In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150 words or fewer).I stood by the front door, the cool autumn breeze attempting to ease my frazzled nerves. Countless pessimistic thoughts raced through my mind as I tried to fathom where I was and what I was doing there. It was my first day volunteering at the nursing home. I regret hesitating to take this opportunity for it helped me develop as a person tremendously. By simple pushing wheelchairs and distributing blankets I encountered exceptional people who gave remarkable advice on living life and setting goals for yourself. I am vastly different from the person who stood outside a door, too afraid to approach a new experience. Volunteering at the nursing home has become more than just a routine, but something that I greatly enjoy doing.Other than grammar, anything that would help it flow better would be awesome too ^^ Maybe a rating out of 10 too? xD I'm so nervous for this application process ):