Pls help me polish the one ,thank you in advance.
Attach an essay of no more than 300 words indicating what most influenced you to apply to Ohio State University (required of all applicants).
Princeton Review ever showed me that OSU's motto is "Open Minds" - which sometimes is seen as a "liberal agenda" - though with the word Liberal used politically. This motto attracts me to search more about Ohio State University from its history to ranking and recognition and from its academic settings to the students' life on campus. As a matter of fact, I am a motivated, outgoing individual trying to pursue an open-minded life. In this case, I believe OSU.
The faculty of International Studies is one of its flagships in OSU and the inspirational phrase ' study the world, and see the world' well matches my personal ambition specializing in contemporary global issues and regional area. My long-term objective is to become a professional, communicative politician who finds a suitable role within an international organization, such as UNESCO and UN, ideally with a specific focus on assisting people who have been displaced due to civil unrest, war, famine or other natural disasters. OSU is the place to be, an international hub, the epicenter to make my career goals a reality.
Along with providing a great education, OSU is a great stage to show my diversified talents especially in women's basketball. Ohio State Buckeyes women's basketball became this first Big Ten team to win conference championships during the 2005-2006 Ohio State school year indicating that I could exhibit my basketball talents to get more chances to be a team member in the women's basketball, thus interacting with people of different backgrounds enhancing my insights towards different life aspects and life style.
Therefore, I dream that one day I will walk in the halls of OSU's beautiful campus and I will be very proud to say that I graduated from one of the most equipped and well-rounded universities in the nation.
Princeton Review ever showed me that OSU's motto...
This motto attracts compels me to search for more information about...
In this case, I believe OSU.
This being the case, I believe OSU's _______ program is perfect for me.
Wow, you give great explanations of your intentions! also, your final sentence is very well-written.
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