'work interview with M&M' -Commonapp - Activity experience write-up

This is my activity experience that was required in the commonapp. Please feel free to comment and highlight any mistakes.
My work interview with M&M went smooth. After shortlisting me from the selection pool of several applicants I was called. The next day I got accepted. This was my first 9 to 5 work, but I managed to cope with it. After familiarizing with my soon-to-be workmates, I was shot with loads of work. There were times when I was appreciated and times when I made mistakes. I quickly learned from my mistakes and in just about a month I would handle around four full- pages of the weekly magazines of M&M and contribute numerous articles to other publications of M&M, namely Life, TikTok and HealthM. Taking interviews with experts and inspiring personas had made me realize things that I wouldn't have learnt otherwise. They had opinions and ideas that made difference. And my job was to spread these revolutionary ideas. These weren't just simple interviews; they were paths that broadened my thinking. I had gained a lot by this experience.

la babaal. M&M khuyauna aba :)

After being shortlisted, I was called by M&M. Although the first interview of my life, it went smooth. I say this because next day I got an acceptance Email. It was my first 9 to 5 work, but I managed to cope with it, and familiarized with my soon-to-be workmates. It was lots of work. There were times when I was appreciated and also when I made mistakes. I learned from my mistakes though, and in just about a month I was able to handle around four full-pages of the weekly magazines and still contribute numerous articles to other publications of M&M, namely Life, TikTok on the clock and Bitch.

Taking interviews with experts and inspiring personas have made me realize things that I wouldn't have learnt otherwise. These people had opinions and ideas, which made differences to me. And my job was to spread these revolutionary ideas. These weren't just interviews; they were paths that broadened my thinking. I have gained a lot by this experience.