Does advertising encourages us to buy products that we really do need?

i would be grateful if somebody correct my essay i should pass the toefl exam soon

Advertisement is an action which is taking greater part of human's life. National Tv channels and radio stations announce every day more and more advertisements. It is a totally new field of development which affect people's decisions. I think that advertisement help people decide which product they need. But there are many publicities offering stupid and useless objects. Thus, I would like to indicate arguments for both standpoints

On one hand, I should emphasize that advertisement is a product of the developed society. Diversity of goods and new technology have lead to more ...

There are a lot more vices of the advertising and marketing world IMO. What is the prompt for this essay?

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Advertisement is playing major role in human's life for deciding our needs and taking decision.

National Tv channels and radio stations announce every day more and more advertisements

Why only National TV channel, instead of you can use All TV channels.

TV channels, radio station, magazines and so on showing advertisements every day.

It is a totally new field of development which affect people's decisions.-- I don't think it is new field
This advertisement is influenced on human's life, which is help people to create requirements and take a decision to choose among them.

useless objects - its not clear what's object means

I can't read your essay but other things is good and properly explained.

Best luck .

-personally, i think that you need to give more strong points.In conclusion , u havent given any particular opinion.u are supporting both the views in conclusion too...i have also written an essay on the same topic n every argumentative essay asks u to take one stand-either for or against.

- In the intro para, u really dont need to right the last line.write lines which have an impact on ur essay.dont try to cover the word count with unnecessary essay...and dont be too judgmental...like u said-stupid and useless products...well the product which u think is stupid might be very useful to some other person.

-have a look at this essay i wrote. any suggestion to make it better is welcome.

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Advertisement is an action which is taking greater part of human's an effort that is taking up a large part of people's lives.

National TV channels and radio stations announce every day more and more advertisements. ---Good sentence!

Look at the way the verb changes if the noun is singular or plural:
It ---> affects
They ----> affect
It is a totally new field of development which affects people's decisions.

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