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The air circulation into and out of the house, resulting in a loss of heat from inside the house


andika08 81 / 80 16  
Sep 30, 2016   #1
The diagram below shows how heat is lost and energy wasted in a house because of air getting into and out of the house.

Summarise the information by reporting the main features and make comparisons where appropriate


The diagram illustrate about circulation of air in the house. It is make effect of using tools inside the house. The effect can produce heat weather.

The house consist of bathroom fan vent, plumbing stack vent, kitchen fan vent, electrical outlet, dryer vent and outdoor faucet. There are different type of cycle air. Air leaking out the house through bathroom fan vent, kitchen fan vent and attichatch. The others is air leaking ino the house with access from electrical outlet, dryer vent and outdoor faucet. Turning the location which the heat wheather is result for using the tools that provide energy. For example, washing machine and kutchen stove. While there are several ventilation holes and small gap between rooms. In other part there is light from above kitchen that other factor for produce heat weather. The upper house have many spot than bottom house. In contrast, many tools in house that produce energy make the athmosphere inside the house different with outside house that can reduce by holes around it.

justivy03 - / 2,367 607  
Sep 30, 2016   #2
Hi Andika, I suppose you can add the diagram the next time you write an analysis, this will help reviewers and readers a like to provide you an even better edge, nonetheless, I can assure you that we will and always provide you with the best and most accurate feedback for your analysis.

Having said that, please find a few suggestions below;

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There you have it Andika, as always I left the rest of the analysis for you to be able to practice writing and editing yourself and I do hope you follow through. For future writing reference, mind the forms of the words that you incorporate in your essay and make sure that you practice writing more often.


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