The air flows out and into the house thus causing inefficient consuming energy on heater operating

The diagram informs the ways air flowing out and into the house thus caused inefficient consuming energy on heater operating. The air is wafted to the house from several vents in the first and second storey of the buildings, meanwhile the air keep leaking from the hatch or the top of it.

It is an energy waste to use temperature conditioner since the cold air is spilled through opening gaps around the structure. In the lowest level, it is flowed in via the crawl space and dryer vent. Furthermore, the windows installed in both middle room and kitchen, the door and electrical outlet in the second level are the circulation path for the breeze air into the house.

On the other hand, heat loss occur through the trapdoor and recessed lightnings designed in the top storey. By these, the architecture of the edifice affects the efficiency of power used to control the temperature inside.

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- The diagram informsillustrates the ways
- of air flowing
-thusthat caused
- inefficient consumingconsumption of energy on
- heater operatingoperation .

- It is an energy waste to be used - on temperature conditioner
- the breeze of the air into the house.

- recessed lightningslightings designed
- By theseHaving said that , the architecture
- of power used to control the temperature inside the infrastructure .

Hi Ray, as you can see I have shared a little modification in your essay, I hope you follow through and create a revision of this essay with the suggested remarks above.

What I notice is that, you have the idea as well as the analysis of the given illustration but this did not transpire in the essay, so more practice writing is required.