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IELTS Bar graph; How people invested money



nadrian 3 / 5  
Aug 29, 2013   #1
IELTS TASK 1. The graph below shows the way people in Somecountry invested thier money during the years 2001-2006.

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The chart shows amount of money spent on bonds and stocks, In some country between year 2001 and 2006.

It can be clearly seen that, lowest amount spent on bonds in year 2001 are recorded 100 billions. The next three higher rates are in
2002,2003 and 2004 are recorded 125 billion, 157 billion and 163 Billion respectively. The following year amount spent on bonds
Were recorded much higher then previous year with sum of 179 billion and only 9 million less than the peak total of year 2006.

Rate on Stock is almost double then bonds Through out the 6 years, where highest rate are recorded in year 2006 (311 billions). The lowest investment of money is recorded in year 2001 and 2002 with sum of 122 and 122 respectively, which are double than the amount spent on bonds in same year.

In the following year, 2004 and 2005 trend is recorded, where amount spent of stocks was nearly double than amount spent on bonds 289 and 297 billion respectively.

In conclusion, the report shows that people are intrested to invested more on stocks campaired to bonds during the period of six year.

dumi 1 / 6793  
Aug 29, 2013   #2
Hi
Where is the graph? Use the "Attach file (s)" feature in your message screen to uplord your graph.
Also follow this structure;
Introduction -you've done it good
Overview- Describe the main trends
Details - Disuss more details with statistics.


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