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Beechwood Farm - Map - IELTS WARRIOR



Mr Calma 17 / 2  
Aug 28, 2025   #1
Task 1: The plans show the site of a farm in 1950, and the same site today.

The two maps below depict the transformation of a farm between 1950 and the present. Overall, the area has shifted from a predominantly rural and raising farm animal place to a recreational-oriented and energy-producing region while still having the previous traits. The key changes include the expansion of entertaining buildings and amenities, the elimination of the sheep farm, and the introduction of a new source of energy.

At the top right of the map, a sheep farm has been comprehensively altered to several dedicated areas, including producing solar energy on the right and a campsite to its left. Additionally, there is a parking site on both sides. Moreover, while the road crosses through the border of the left side of this farm and the surrounding river still remains intact, the internal track in the centre of the village has witnessed a change to the new road expanding to the bottom of a smaller barn.

Concerning the bottom left of Beechwood Farm, there was an agricultural area including fruit trees, soft fruits, and vegetable farmland. At present, their location remains unchanged, whilst a farm store appears in the fruit tree land.

To the bottom right of the map, although a chicken farm and a farmhouse do not record any alterations regarding their location which was near the river and stayed in the middle in advance, the barn has been converted into a contemporary holiday cottage for entertaining purposes.

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Mr Calma


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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15921  
Aug 29, 2025   #2
The two maps

When writing the report, you must always assume that the reader does not have a copy of the image. That is why those taking these practice tests are advised to never refer to the image position on the page. Keep it as a general reference. The type of image is important, the location of the image is not. You will actually lose scoring considerations when you Di that. Aside from this error, the first paragraph is actually a huge improvement over the first practice report and should receive a better scoring consideration.

At the top right of the map,

Concerning the bottom left

The location reference appears to be a repeated error in this essay. You will definitely receive marked deductions for this mistake. You also have to remember that there is a 3 sentence minimum per paragraph. This is an academic piece of writing so it follows the academic paragraph format of at least 3 sentences.

Unfortunately this essay will not get a very good score because of the repeated errors and the problem with paragraph formatting.


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