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Biography Writing about Emma Watson



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Dec 22, 2023   #1
Emma Watson is a globally acclaimed actress. She was born in 1990 in France, but she moved to England after her parent divorced. A tough childhood can't prevent her from dreaming of being a reputation actress. From age six, trained at the Oxford branch of a part-time theatre school, where she kept the fire of passion.

The British-born actress embarked on her achievement in 1999 with the role of Hermione Granger in the "Harry Potter" movies which was a box-office hit worldwide. With her impressive appearance, confidence, and passion for occupation, she was judged an actress who stole the show. She subsequently appeared in a diversity of types of films: drama, sci-fi thriller, and historical thriller....As a consequence, she won MTV's Gender-Neutral Acting Prize in 2017 which is the first award ever in history that doesn't separate the gender of the nominees.

In addition to becoming a famous actress, she is an advocate for gender equality. Her most inspirational role is working with the United Nations Women to stop women from being abused. Watson also emerged as a fashionista, her style catching the eye of many major figures in the fashion industry. She is a true role model for young females everywhere.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15385  
Dec 25, 2023   #2
she moved to England after her parent

A parent is a single unit. A single parent cannot be divorced. Emma Watson's parents divorced. Use the plural form of parent. Do not forget the +S for the plural form of word representations. Writing these free form essays would be the best way for you to practice proper English sentence formations.

embarked on her achievement

If she had achieved this in 1999, then she embarked on it sooner than that time. You cannot have achieved the same during the year when you started pursing it. This is a word usage problem on your part. You are weak when it comes to proper English vocabulary choices and/or usage.

consequence

As a result. A consequence denotes a negative occurrence with regards to the actions of a person.


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