Some birds migrate from the breeding ground to the other area for the rest of the remained season.

IELTS Summary 2: Bird Migration

In life, there is a kind of situation brings us to make an alteration. The same thing as what the bird follows through in its life. The bird migrates from the breeding ground to the other area for the rest of the left season.

Birds migrate in two kinds of forms, across latitudes and altitudes. When birds migrate across the latitudes, they travel head off higher latitudes to lower latitudes. Subsequently, in the term of birds migrate across altitudes, the phenomenon shows birds alight from higher to lower altitudes.

Birds navigate the location by looking at the nature cues. At the time birds migrate, they also exert their body fat to fuel this remarkable escapade. Thus, this bird's movement always overawed observers for centuries.

Helllo Dils,

I have already read your work. Let me give yours some suggestions about it. From the first sentence, there is the serious problem because your sentence is incomplete. it means there is one subject (a kind of situation), but it has two verb (is and bring). it also happened in the following sentence. for the others sentences, in my point of view, they are good enough. probably, you should increase your language in use how to utilize the collocations correctly.

Hii dills ..that is nice in your essay but i have a bit advices about how to use other and another
For example : i want to look at other people /areas /
I want look at another human /area
After Another has to be added singular
Other has to be added plural
Hoping helps thanks

Hello
You have a good summary
I have some corrections

... the bird follows through inits it is life. The bird migrates from the breeding ground to the other area for the rest of the left season.

At the time birds migrate migration, they also (...) fuel this remarkable escapade journey.
... observers for centuries.

Maybe there are some sentences not clear.
You can added an introduction for the first sentence.
You can also put conjuction in the first sentence.