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Before bricks can be used by a builder, they must be in the drying oven for 24 until 48 hours



La Baso 15 / 21  
Apr 11, 2016   #1
The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram gives information about the ways that must be done to manufacture bricks before using for the building industry purpose. It can be seen that, several processes in these bricks before to be delivered directly.

To manufacture the bricks, clay that is taken by a digger must be put in the metal grid and after that must be in the roller. The next process is that the clay is be added by sand and water, and can be box shaped in both different ways like by mould or by wire cutter.

Before the bricks are being used for building industry, it must be in drying oven for 24 until 48 hours. After that, it is placed in the kiln at moderate 200C-980C and next at around high 870C-1300C. In addition, before being packed, the bricks once in the cooling chamber for 48-72 hours. Finally, these all bricks are ready to be delivered by the truck for the purpose of building industry.


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justivy03 - / 2265  
Apr 11, 2016   #2
Hi Baso, it seemed as though you have a lot of projects today. Anyway, please find my suggestions below and I hope you follow through.

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