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Charity began at home - helping others essay



akhalifa 1 / -  
Dec 16, 2013   #1
We all agree that charity has vital role nowadays. Charity has a different ways for helping people like money donation or aid by medicines,clothes, and services.

charitable organization founded as the human needs anywhere in the world. God created people to help each other.Therefore best people most beneficial for people.charity begins at home is important thing to help people in our area first like neighbors in city or country that mean you are feeling and sharing in their concerns and problem .

in every country of the world ,charity can be found . In my country a lot of charitable organization ,but the role required of them according to humanitarian standards regardless of personal or political consideration .

Money does everything but if you are supporting the charitable organization by money and there no control this can open a big door for corruption and fraud.The best thing the supporting depend on the people needs like building hospital,schools,skills centers and so on.

Some time the charitable organization can use money in wrong ways such as bought weapons and guns.
My sharing with charitable organization is by donating a little amount of many but on the other hand I helped by services like teaching or sharing in vaccination campaigns.

In my opinion charity can be semi-compulsory because if you do not help people a round you we will not find their help when you are need it tomorrow .

We should not think charity mean money donation only .charity is a wide sector anyone can share by their ability.
Lastly the statement ( charity begins at home ) here addition to be ( charity begins at home and do not stop until we do not find anyone need charity)

Pahan 1 / 1824  
Dec 16, 2013   #2
First, what is the topic of this essay. It is important for us to know the topic or the prompt so that we know what it expects from you and also we can check whether your writing is aligned with those requirements. Make sure include that with your essay . Even now, it is good if you can post it here for others to know to earn more meaningful feedbacks.

We all agree thatcharity has vital role nowadays

... generally is role is played. Also, charity plays a vital role in what? You need to specify!
We all agree that charity plays a vital role in poverty alleviation in today's society. ... may be you have a different reason to say, but whatever it is, you need to specify that!
dumi 1 / 6793  
Dec 17, 2013   #3
Charity has a different ways for helping people like money donation or aid by medicines,clothes, and services.

Charity is about helping people either with money or other forms of aids such as medicine, clothes and services.

charitable organization founded as the human needs anywhere in the world.

... What does this mean? I don't get your point :(
I don't understand the purpose you wrote this essay. It is good if you mentioned that in your title.


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