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IELTS TASK 1 - The Chart of Emigration Intentions in Bulgaria



Bayuwibowo 48 / 62  
Sep 10, 2015   #1
The chart illustrates comparison of people of Bulgaria above 15 and below 60 years old aiming to Emigration with different purposes between 2001 and 2006. Overall it can be seen that, inhabitants who do not have any planning to go abroad is the highest percentage among all.

According to the data, 2001 experienced a considerable higher in the number of Bulgarians which is prefer to staying in their country around 70%. It was stark in contrast to dweller who want to live abroad for a short time, its only took 5% from all of the percentage. The rest eagerness such as travelling as tourist, live abroad for a short time, work abroad then return, and permanent resident in abroad give a small percentage at 10%,5%, 7%, and 8% respectively.

Furthermore, there was an alteration in the emigration intentions from 2001 to 2006 except live abroad permanently which is remain stable at 8%. In 2006, the percentage of people who have no willingness to travel abroad still dominating the chart solely at seven in ten. On the other hand, dwellers who wants to work outside the country and then return to Bulgaria the lowest percentage solely at 4 percent in 2006. The rest intentions for holiday as tourist took 10% and live abroad for a short time approximately one in twenty in 2006.


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Muhammadyusuf 7 / 13  
Sep 10, 2015   #2
inhabitants who do not have any planning to go abroad is the highest percentage among all.

Be carefull !! this essay has time frame during 2001 to 2006. It means that you have to use simple past.
This is my review : inhabitans who did not have planning to go to abroad were the highest percentage among all reasons.


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