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The given bar chart illustrates the data about the age of women in Australia when they had a baby for the first time in 1966, 1986 and 2006.
Overall, the number of first-time pregnancies after age 30 is rising, while first births before age 24 are declining. First-time births between ages 25 and 29 have been fluctuating.
In 1996, over a third of individuals under 20 had a baby, while in the most recent year this dropped to just over 10%. Initially, the most common age group for pregnancy was 20 to 24, constituting over three-fifths of pregnancies. Over 100 years, this number significantly decreased to 30% by the final year. In 1966, fewer than 40% of individuals aged 25 to 29 had their first child. This number increased to 50% in 1986 and dropped to around 40% in 2006.
The percentage of women aged 30 to 34 giving birth for the first time increased slowly from 12% to 19% in the first 20 years. It then sharply jumped to about 50% in 2006, making it the most common age group for first-time mothers. The percentage of first-time mothers aged 35 to 39 increased from less than 10% to 30%. For those 40 and older, having a first baby remained the least common, with only 5% in 2006.
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The given bar chart illustrates the data about the age of women in Australia when they had a baby for the first time in 1966, 1986 and 2006.
Overall, the number of first-time pregnancies after age 30 is rising, while first births before age 24 are declining. First-time births between ages 25 and 29 have been fluctuating.
In 1996, over a third of individuals under 20 had a baby, while in the most recent year this dropped to just over 10%. Initially, the most common age group for pregnancy was 20 to 24, constituting over three-fifths of pregnancies. Over 100 years, this number significantly decreased to 30% by the final year. In 1966, fewer than 40% of individuals aged 25 to 29 had their first child. This number increased to 50% in 1986 and dropped to around 40% in 2006.
The percentage of women aged 30 to 34 giving birth for the first time increased slowly from 12% to 19% in the first 20 years. It then sharply jumped to about 50% in 2006, making it the most common age group for first-time mothers. The percentage of first-time mothers aged 35 to 39 increased from less than 10% to 30%. For those 40 and older, having a first baby remained the least common, with only 5% in 2006.