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IELTS TASK 1 - The chart below gives information about Southland's main export



ainirere /  
Apr 10, 2016   #1
The chart below gives information about Southland's main export in 2000, 2015 and future projections for 2025.

The southland's main exports in the year 2000, 2015 and 2025 are depicted in the chart. It is noticeable that the international tourism is the highest earning export throughout the year while the meat products are the smallest.

In 2000, the international tourism as the majority of main exports has spent £8 billion while the least was meat product in which only earned £6 billion. However in 2015, the diary product was the highest export with the total earning was nearly £10 billion, whereas the meat product was still the smallest whereby declined instead to about £5.5 billion.

In addition, the chart shows the future prediction of exports in 2025 as well where the international tourism will peak at nearly £10 billion. Then the diary product will become the second highest with the total earning at about £9.5 billion and the minority product is meat that forecasted will decrease at only £5 billion.


  • Southlands_main_expo.png


justivy03 - / 2265  
Apr 16, 2016   #2
Hi Rere, I have a few additional insights for your essay,

I believe, your analysis is one of the most comprehensive ones that I have read so far, you made sure that the information depicted on the chart is clearly analyzed and elaborately written in the essay.

The thing that I like most about it is that, you have given full observation to the details of the chart, the measurements, the facts and the figures are in line with all the necessary and vital information of the data provided.

Overall, it's a very well written analysis and as much as I want to stress, I know you will do much better in the next projects that you will have. Maintain the details, the focus to the information as well as keeping the rules of the language evident to the essay.


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