The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

reading unemployment rate from the graph

The line graph demonstrates the unemployment circumstance in rural and urban regions over the course of 4 months in 2012.
Looking at the graph, It is immediately obvious that the proportion of the unemployed in urban areas experienced an upward trend over the period given, while the opposite is true for rural areas. The rate in urban regions peaked by the second and third quarters.

At the start of the period, the countryside registered the highest figure for joblessness, beginning by 6.5%, whereas that rate in cities was lower, at about 2%. In the first half of 2012, there was a double increase in the proportion of jobless people in urban regions from 2% to 4%. On the contrary, an opposite trend was witnessed in rural areas, which fell steadily over the first six months and immediately hit the lowest point of 4.5% after that.

In the third quarter, the urban unemployment rate declined steeply to 2% before going up gradually. It continued to rise and reached the peak at nearly 5% at the end of the period. On the other hand, the number of jobless people in the countryside reached a plateau and finished at a fairly high point of 5%, slightly above cities.

The writer needs to consider the time limitation when creating the report. It must be completed within 175-200 words only. Any more words and proofreading, In relation to the final score will be affected. A 5 minute editing time pocket is practically mandatory for this task. Trust me when I say the corrections and improvements - made during this time will be beneficial to the final score of the exam taker.

The image shows more than one circumstance reference. There must be an S added to the singular word to create the plural reference form, the correct word to be used in the sentence. There is a reference made to trends twice in the report. Reformat the second trend. There is a single trending statement requirement for this task.

You need to add the picture of the line graph beside your essay, which will help to understand your essay easier. Also, I think you use too many statistics in your essay, and you should focus on the important figures using more comparisons.

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