The charts illustrate the surveying results of adult schooling. UC prompt

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reasons for study by adults

The charts illustrate the surveying results of adult schooling. The bar graph gives information about the reasons for deciding to study from adults. The second chart demonstrates how people ponder the prices of mature schooling should be shared.

Overall, it is evident that the interest in subjects and the gaining qualifications are the cause of deciding to learn from grown-ups, and according to them the cost of this study should be shared by an individual.

In detail, the majority of adults prefer to get a study due to interest in the subject, which gives 40 percent, while 38 percent enroll to gain qualifications. Nevertheless, making new friends is definitely the lowest criterion with just under 10 percent.

Furthermore, the pie chart provides information about the way of educations costs in every course has to be coped with. The individual should share the maximum costs as the highest percentage, with 40 percent. In contrast, taxpayer must bear 25 percent of this cost.

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Both images need to be properly identified in the summary paragraph. The first image was properly identified while the second image only had a general reference, which was not even descriptive so, it is useless to the clarity of the summary paragraph. Just like all the other images provided for this task, there are specific image names for each measurement type. The clear identification of the image helps the reader better understand the discussion basis, even when an image is not provided.

The information presented is a series of run-on sentences which limits the analysis and comparison discussion of the data. There is not enough measurement between images mentioned to prove that the writer actually studied and compared the images. A full analysis and accurate report is not completed in only 2 sentences. That is just a draft. The best scoring essay for this task uses 3-5 sentences. No short-cuts. short reports mean limited scoring as well.