The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008.

Đề bài 1:
The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

ANSWER:

The pie charts give information about the figures of different sources of electricity supplied in four nations, namely India, Sweden, Morocco, and Vietnam during five years, from 2003 to 2008.

Overall, Vietnam and India used a considerable amount of electricity from fossil fuel while Sweden and Morocco had the vast majority of hydro power . Only India and Sweden produced nuclear power.

As can be seen, India considered Fossil fuel as the main source with 82 percent. Following this country is Vietnam that had the percentage Fossil fuel stood at 56%. Meanwhile, a mere 5 % source is supplied for Morocco and 4% for Sweden. Nuclear power is only produced in two countries India and Sweden with 4% and 44%, respectively.

However, Hydropower was used in all 4 countries in which Morocco ranked highest proportion about 95%, Sweden had roughly at 52%, and lower percentage was Vietnam with 56%. The smallest data of this source was India which accounted for 14%.

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Divide the summary overview and trending paragraphs into at least 3 sentences each when representing the initial information from the image. This will allow the writer to use a unique image number and identifier that will be perfectly aligned with The summary TA requirements. Separating the information into sentences helps achieve information clarity in relation to coherence and cohesiveness requirements.


This sentence requires a comma to present a pause (for clarity) in the sentence. The comma should come after the word "countries" or be formatted as:

... countries, namely India and Sweden.

Though there are some sentence word formation errors in the report, the data remains clear to the reader and will be considered for at least a passing score in the end.

As can be seen -> One could also spot
By using this phrase, you can limit in using Vietnamese mindset

of electricity supplied in four nations, namely, India, ... during five years, from 2003 to 2008.

had the vast majority vast and majority both has the same meaning . Only India and Sweden produced nuclear power.

The lexical resource is not strong enough. (The nuclear power was only used as a source by Indians and Swedish over the period)

As can be seen, India
Following this country is Vietnam that had the ... 56% for fossil fuel.
Nuclear power is only produced do not repeat, only add values

However, Hydropower ... percentage was at Vietnam with 56%. The SMALLEST DATA of ... for 14%.