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The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008.



hynnie 1 / -  
Jun 13, 2024   #1
The pie charts compare the amount of electricity being produced among 3 energy sources in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008.
Overall, fossil fuel took the highest proportion in India and Vietnam while in other countries, hydro power stood out as the primary source.
India and Sweden are two countries that produced electricity by 3 sources of energy: fossil fuel, hydro power and nuclear power. 82% of electricity was made by fossil fuel in India while in Sweden, there was just small amount of it being used, accounting for 4%. In Sweden, hydro power and nuclear power took the lead, comprising 52% and 44% of the total amount in contrast to India where there was just 14% of hydro power and 4% of nuclear power.

Morocco and Vietnam just produced electricity by 2 ways: using fossil fuel and hydro power. Almost the amount of electricity in Morocco was generated by hydro power, just 5% of it was contributed from fossil fuel. However, in Vietnam, more than half of eletricity production was from fossil fuel, took up to 52%. Following closely, hydro power was responsible for 44% of electricity amount.


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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15393  
Jun 20, 2024   #2
The summary overview is not very effective seeing as it is a run-on sentence. This should be divided into at least 3 sentences that represent:
1. The number of images;
2. The inclusive countries;
3. The measurement method;
4. The trending sentence.

Quick question, where did the years reference come from? I do not see any reference to that in the image provided. Where did it come from?

while in other countrie

Indicate the other 2 country names since you indicated the first 2 countries in the previous presentation.

Work on your formatting for the task 1 essay. This should be presented over 3 paragraphs, properly spaced apart on the page. You have to be clear about the paragraph separation because each paragraph focuses on a specific discussion. Without it, the essay is difficult to follow.


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