compare and contrast your fashion style with that of someone you know

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Compare and contrast your fashion style with that of someone you know

All sisters and brothers have lots of thing in common , my sister and I have lots of common thing too . We have the same body style , ear color and hair . So we also wear the same size in cloths . However the same physical appearance , we have totally different taste and characteristic .

I usually wear dark color and try to wear formal in more situations , but she always wear bright clothes . She is in style al time ,but I'm not ,so I think that's why all people at the first look think I'm older however she is older 4 year . She sais me you are tacky and all of your clothes are black and similar while she steal some of my beautiful clothes .

I really like sport style and always wear simple manto , jeans and sport shoes , I never like to wear heels , but she most of the time wear heels , most of her cloths are unique , she doesn't like buying some clothes that everybody else has .

I like big earing and bracelets but wear them just at home . like her , I don't like makeup , I always just use lipstick and cream , it just take me five minute every morning .

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....no grammar issues, but you can improve presentation of this idea;
Most of the sisters have lots of things in common and so do I and my sister.


We share the same body type, skin color and hair.


So the size of our cloths are the same.

Here is I found on the net that should be followed as an organizational structure for your compare and contrast essay;
Introduction
Presents the basic information about the subjects to be compared and contrasted
Provides a thesis argument and 3 points of comparison that will be elaborated in the body of your essay. Points of comparison are the smaller arguments that help you develop your main argument.

Body Paragraphs
This is the meat of your essay. Each different section or body paragraph should tackle a different division of proof. It should provide and analyze evidence in order to connect those proofs to your thesis and support your thesis. You have to decide whether you'll be organizing your essay with three body paragraphs (using point-by-point organization) or with two body paragraphs (using whole-to-whole comparison).

Acknowledgement of Competitive Arguments/Concession
This paragraph acknowledges that other counter-arguments exist, but remarks how those arguments are flawed.
Conclusion
Summary of the evidence presented
Restatement of the thesis

A key point: How and What to analyze the differences and/or the similarities of two distinct subjects are the purpose of a compare and contrast essay