The essay question is "Which one, in your opinion, is more persuasive and why? Do your own feelings on the subject contribute to your opinion?"
I have to do a comparison essay on Edward M. Forester's "On Tolerance" and Jomo Kenyatta's fable "Gentleman of the Jungle". I had to do this assignment for school, and I am a canadian in grade 11. What do you rate this essay and what could I do better?
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Tolerance and Power
In order for people to live harmoniously within a community, they must make a few realizations first. Love is powerful, but for everyone to express it all the time is irrational and for the most part impractical. But one may ask, isn't love the essence of good relationships? Love can prevent people from turning against each other, but tolerance is much more sustainable and equally adequate. Edward M. Forster and Jomo Kenyatta explain what is required to live harmoniously through some interesting literature. While E. M. Forster encourages tolerance through a straightforward essay, Jomo Kenyatta brings across his message of peace through a fable. Point is, for a global community to survive at a level of mutual understanding and peace; people must be courteous and tolerant.
As indicated by E. M. Forster in his essay on tolerance, people must learn to respect each other's differences. For most people, it is impossible to love everything in life. Many may find it difficult to accept others for whom they are, but treating others unfairly for impersonal reasons is unjust. If people don't tolerate each other's differences and beliefs, freedom of speech is compromised as well as the lives of many. Freedom of speech is a big part of democracy, and so is tolerance. "What difference does it make to the dead, the orphans, and the homeless, whether the mad destruction is wrought under the name of totalitarianism or the holy name of liberty and democracy?" This quote from Mahatma Gandhi clearly reflects the previous point. If people were free to kill and persecute who ever they pleased, society would crumble under hatred's foot. Mahatma Gandhi struggled to bring peace to the conflicting Hindus and Muslims of India, and in his struggle the quote "An eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind" was made to reflect what happens when people resort to anger and violence. True, is it not? Edward M. Forster stated "Don't try to love them: You can't, and you'll only strain yourself. But try to tolerate them. On the bases of that tolerance a civilized future may be built". It only makes sense that a civilization will strive if the people within it are civil.
Although tolerance is of utmost importance, so is power. If a nation is desperate to expand its dominion, it may conquer another nation. Jomo Kenyatta's fable Gentleman of the Jungle is a symbolic example of how power can also cause people to turn against each other. When one takes advantage of another's weakness, intolerance is demonstrated. But when one takes out their anger on someone who did them wrong, it is revenge (or self defense depending on the situation). Although Gentleman of the Jungle was an entertaining read, it doesn't cover the fact people can be cruel without having extrinsic motivations (the hunger for power). It's insightful but it lacks the stern attitude required to tell the reader that the struggle for power is a serious issue that must be stopped. A desperate or naïve person could even be inspired by the man in the fable to reject certain authorities and extort others. Edward M. Forster's way of utilizing the medium is more effective at delivering a clear message that asks for consideration on the presented issue. Intolerance is the root of all problems relating to civilization.
Some level of dominion is required by a civilization to strive, but as a global community tolerance must be practiced to its fullest extent. It has been revealed to humanity time and time again that intolerance will surely lead to war and death. As long as peace is induced by the people and for the people, love will eventually fall into place. "We must be the change we wish to see" -Mahatma Gandhi
I have to do a comparison essay on Edward M. Forester's "On Tolerance" and Jomo Kenyatta's fable "Gentleman of the Jungle". I had to do this assignment for school, and I am a canadian in grade 11. What do you rate this essay and what could I do better?
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Tolerance and Power
In order for people to live harmoniously within a community, they must make a few realizations first. Love is powerful, but for everyone to express it all the time is irrational and for the most part impractical. But one may ask, isn't love the essence of good relationships? Love can prevent people from turning against each other, but tolerance is much more sustainable and equally adequate. Edward M. Forster and Jomo Kenyatta explain what is required to live harmoniously through some interesting literature. While E. M. Forster encourages tolerance through a straightforward essay, Jomo Kenyatta brings across his message of peace through a fable. Point is, for a global community to survive at a level of mutual understanding and peace; people must be courteous and tolerant.
As indicated by E. M. Forster in his essay on tolerance, people must learn to respect each other's differences. For most people, it is impossible to love everything in life. Many may find it difficult to accept others for whom they are, but treating others unfairly for impersonal reasons is unjust. If people don't tolerate each other's differences and beliefs, freedom of speech is compromised as well as the lives of many. Freedom of speech is a big part of democracy, and so is tolerance. "What difference does it make to the dead, the orphans, and the homeless, whether the mad destruction is wrought under the name of totalitarianism or the holy name of liberty and democracy?" This quote from Mahatma Gandhi clearly reflects the previous point. If people were free to kill and persecute who ever they pleased, society would crumble under hatred's foot. Mahatma Gandhi struggled to bring peace to the conflicting Hindus and Muslims of India, and in his struggle the quote "An eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind" was made to reflect what happens when people resort to anger and violence. True, is it not? Edward M. Forster stated "Don't try to love them: You can't, and you'll only strain yourself. But try to tolerate them. On the bases of that tolerance a civilized future may be built". It only makes sense that a civilization will strive if the people within it are civil.
Although tolerance is of utmost importance, so is power. If a nation is desperate to expand its dominion, it may conquer another nation. Jomo Kenyatta's fable Gentleman of the Jungle is a symbolic example of how power can also cause people to turn against each other. When one takes advantage of another's weakness, intolerance is demonstrated. But when one takes out their anger on someone who did them wrong, it is revenge (or self defense depending on the situation). Although Gentleman of the Jungle was an entertaining read, it doesn't cover the fact people can be cruel without having extrinsic motivations (the hunger for power). It's insightful but it lacks the stern attitude required to tell the reader that the struggle for power is a serious issue that must be stopped. A desperate or naïve person could even be inspired by the man in the fable to reject certain authorities and extort others. Edward M. Forster's way of utilizing the medium is more effective at delivering a clear message that asks for consideration on the presented issue. Intolerance is the root of all problems relating to civilization.
Some level of dominion is required by a civilization to strive, but as a global community tolerance must be practiced to its fullest extent. It has been revealed to humanity time and time again that intolerance will surely lead to war and death. As long as peace is induced by the people and for the people, love will eventually fall into place. "We must be the change we wish to see" -Mahatma Gandhi