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Essay On Comparisons of Trials and Their Respective Jury Proceedings



SeanMasih 2 / 5  
Feb 12, 2009   #1
Our English 10 class had just finished reading To Kill A Mockingbird by Harper Lee and 12 Angry Men by Reginald Rose. We then were instructed to pick out a recent major trial and compare that to one of the two reading subjects. I chose the Trial of Timothy McVeigh (Oklahoma City Bombing) and 12 Angry Men. Initially, I had some trouble deciding how to create this and convince people about the similarities of it. I can assure you this is definitely not one of my greatest pieces of writing. I don't have any great pieces of writing =). I didn't have any time to correct any of my stupid mistakes so please bear. Recommendations and corrections highly anticipated and appreciated.

Note: in text citations were also a part of the grading rubric!

Who better to embody the great American jury system than one of the greatest Founding Fathers, Thomas Jefferson who not only revolutionized the three branches of our government but democracy itself? "It is left, therefore, to the juries, if they think the permanent judges are under any bias whatever in any case, to take on themselves to judge the law as well as the fact. They never exercise this power but when they suspect partiality in the judges, and by the exercise of this power" (Deadliest 2). True these words are, as they not only explain the objective of the jury but their duty. During these intra-court proceedings in Reginald Rose's 12 Angry Men and the Timothy McVeigh trial, the jury had a major role in the reaching of justice in both cases as they ultimately controlled the outcome of the trials. In the American system of government, power derives from the consent of the governed. This power comes from a fundamental institution: the jury. Without the jury, the judicial system would be rendered useless and therefore its jurisdiction, void. Although they were from different time periods, the Timothy McVeigh trial and the fictional trial 12 Angry Men by Rose Reginald are similar in that justice was achieved because of the time and place both took place, through the reviewing of evidence and through the use of reasonable doubt.

Both trials heavily employed the use of reasonable doubt to reach justice. In 12 Angry Men, juror number eight took a stand against all odds and speculations and analyzed the evidence and testimonies and placed reasonable doubt in the jurors' minds. Reasonable doubt in this trial was heavily impressed; with murder cases in the United States, all of the jurors have to vote guilty to get a guilty conviction, but if one juror had reasonable doubt as to who really committed the murder, then the jury would be declared as "hung" - meaning that they cannot pass a valid jurisdiction. This is how one juror, juror number eight, was able to take a stand against his counterparts in the jury room. Initially, the jurors had a vote 1 - 11 for guilty (Herman). Juror number eight, being the juror who chose to take a stand, reviewed the evidence and instilled reasonable doubt in the other jurors' minds by reviewing the evidence and testimonies with the other jurors. Similarly, in the Timothy McVeigh trial, reasonable doubt played a major role in his jurisdiction because the jurors reached a mutual consent choosing that McVeigh should be sent to death (Linder). As in murder cases, all jurors must agree on the guilt of the suspect to receive the full penalty of the law. All speculations of conspiracies were disputed and a consensus was reached and McVeigh was guilty of all eleven counts of murder and conspiracy (Linder). Reasonable doubt is such a powerful aspect of the great American justice system so much so that it can decide the guilt or innocence of a man.

The time and place both cases took place have created similar effects on the cases. 12 Angry Men took place in a large eastern city sometime during the 1950s (Herman). Even in the North at the time, racism and prejudice towards groups of people was at its peak. Some of the jurors who partook in the trial of the young man were very much prejudiced toward people of the lower class from which the defendant came. This was a clear-cut murder case in which the young man's father was stabbed in the stomach with a switchblade. Half a century prior to the Timothy McVeigh trial, investigations in the young man's case were much less high-tech and efficient, as the world of forensic science had not advanced yet. Similarly, in the Oklahoma City Bombing, suspect Timothy McVeigh's life was at stake for eleven counts of murder. However, the bombing occurred in the mid 1990s with the field of forensic sciences highly advanced and investigations more thorough and intricate (Linder). In Oklahoma, the state in which the bombing took place, the legislature regulates militias of which McVeigh was a part of, to be under heavy surveillance and restricted from special acts of protesting (Militias). Many Oklahoma militias did not resort to acts of terrorism in Oklahoma City (Militias). In fact, many of the militia leaders stated that they thought the government actually bombed the building or had a large part in it (Cooper 2). Also, the Oklahoma State Constitution states that any murderer prosecuted for murder would be appointed an attorney and a minimum of two jury hearings. After the suspected murderer is convicted, s/he must go to a final hearing and then be put to death by lethal injection (Militias). Both suspects' lives in each case were put at stake and both the young man and McVeigh relied heavily on the evidence that was brought forth and the jury's prerogative to analyze thereof.

The reviewing of evidence and testimonies by the juries in both cases played a major role in reaching a fair verdict. In 12 Angry Men, there were many fallible pieces of evidence that juror number eight insisted on reviewing. Juror number eight questioned the physical evidence and the testimonies that were put forth by the prosecution and provided the basis for his arguments. First, juror number eight started off with challenging the peculiarity of the knife that was used to stab the young man's father. The prosecution claimed that the storeowner stated there was only one knife of its kind (Herman). However, juror number eight quickly disproved this affidavit by purchasing a switchblade identical to that used in the murder. After proving that there could invariably be more than one suspect, juror number eight challenged the fashion in which the young man's father was murdered. The coroner and police reports stated that the young man's father was stabbed at a downward angle. The rest of the jury figured that since the young man was shorter than his father, he would have to stab downwards to induce a lethal jab (Herman). However, the jury looked over Bobby's record and his history with knives. Juror number eight recalled that in the young man's earlier years, he had been expelled from school for engaging in a knife fight. Bobby had a history with knives and therefore an experienced knife fighter. Juror number five, armed with his experience on the streets corroborated with juror number eight's case by presenting the way in which a knife fighter would hold his knife: at the waist. So the stab wound would inevitably be near the belly button area, not the chest. (Herman). The first testimony that was called into question was the old lady's. She stated that she saw the young man murder his father through the windows of a moving El Train (Herman). Juror number eight, along with the other jurors, concluded that it took about for an El Train to pass any given point. The jurors then agreed that it could not have taken ten seconds for the stabbing to happen (Herman). The second testimony that was called into question was the old man's. He initially stated that when he was in bed he heard a struggle in the room below him (Herman). He heard some screaming and shouting so he got up and walked down the hallway and into the room below his. He stated that it took him about ten to twenty seconds to get to the other room. He then reported that he saw a figure run out of the apartment into the street (Herman). The old man then claimed that the figure was the young man who murdered his father. Juror number eight proceeded to contest this testimony by acting out the old man's actions when he went downstairs to see the ruckus. Juror number eight acted out his actions while juror number ten timed it. It turned out to take more than forty seconds to get from his room to the one below him, therefore further disputing the prosecutions' accusations (Herman). Similarly, in the trial of Timothy McVeigh, the prosecution to obtain justice used very intricate pieces of evidence against him. Prior to the bombing, Timothy had purchased 5000 pounds of ammonium nitrate, and agricultural fertilizer, Timothy was not a farmer. Also found was that McVeigh purchased nitro-methane, a highly volatile motor-racing fuel known as Kinepak or ANFO; the receipts for these purchases were tracked back to McVeigh's credit card (Happened). The rented twenty four-foot Ryder truck application was also traced back to his home address and phone number (Happened). In addition to the traces, a witness testified, "I saw Mr. McVeigh driving one of the Ryder trucks at approximately 8:50 a.m. with someone sitting right next to him...it was another man" (Cooper 7). McVeigh had a record of opposition to the government ever since the age of fourteen. From the time when his parents divorced when he was thirteen, McVeigh had leaded a secluded life and was regularly bullied at school (Russakoff). Because of these detrimental experiences, McVeigh had shown an extreme dislike towards bullies including oppressive governments. When he was in his early twenties, he attended a computer college in Buffalo, New York. After studying there for two years, he dropped out and joined the military (Russakoff). In the military, McVeigh excelled. "[McVeigh] was extremely obsessed with guns... [He] took courses in the military on explosives. He more than often experimented with small scale explosives" (Russakoff). He passed with flying colors in the Rangers Selection Company (Linder). "The four years that McVeigh was in the military were probably the best years of his life" (Deadliest). During his time in the service, he had met his accomplice and friend, Terry Nichols. McVeigh and Nichols shared many of the same ideas about the government. However, when McVeigh applied for the Green Berets and was told that he didn't have the "right stuff", he asked for and received an honorable discharge (Russakoff). After his discharge, McVeigh had become involved in many militias and anti-government groups such as the Union Sun group. McVeigh also joined a group created by Andreas Strassmeir, the grandson of a founder of the Nazi party (Cooper 16). Strassmeir's name and group had shown up many times in the newspaper for involvement in domestic terrorism and has been on high surveillance since the Oklahoma City bombing. But the real resentment towards the government sprouted after McVeigh witnessed the Waco Siege in 1993 (Linder). He was so enraged by the siege that he reportedly got up from his couch and punched a hole in the wall screaming, "I hate the government!" (Russakoff). He later proceeded to write a response to the Lockport Union Sun expressing his hatred toward the government (Cooper 14). On a beautiful Wednesday morning at 9:01, everything seemed to be going just like every other day for the 253 workers at the Alfred P. Murrah building. However, at approximately 9:02, a yellow Ryder truck parked outside the building in a handicapped parking lot and detonates killing 165 people including 19 children (Linder). Forty-five minutes later, McVeigh was stopped for driving without a license and is taken to the police station (Linder). He was then connected to the bombing two days later through credit card purchases and rental applications. McVeigh had shown the patterns of a murderer and convict. Throughout his life, McVeigh had been though times of sadness and hatred towards the government. "Timothy lived a hard life. At [the age of] fourteen, his parents divorced... [After the divorce] his life was [in complete darkness]. He was bullied and shunned throughout his life" (Linder). The jurors in the trial soon saw and acknowledged the pattern that Timothy had been showing throughout his life and, without much hesitation, all jurors voted him guilty as charged (Linder). After being convicted of all eleven counts of murder and conspiracy, McVeigh was sentenced to death by lethal injection at 7:14 in the morning on June 11, 2001 (Cooper 17). The epitome of justice was thus rendered in the trial of Timothy McVeigh.

In both 12 Angry Men and the Timothy McVeigh trial, the juries played a major role in reaching justice. With the evidence and testimonies that were presented, the jury's job was to analyze them and deliver a verdict and in both cases, the juries executed. Although no one knows what really went on inside the jury's room on the day of McVeigh's conviction, it can be assured that whoever was a part of the jury, did his/her job. And although 12 Angry Men is a fictional play, Reginald Rose did a fantastic job of showing how and why the jury not only declares a man guilty or not, but legislates justice while emanating the shining light of justice that symbolizes the great country of America. This aspect of the American judicial system is the very aspect that makes it great.

EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Feb 13, 2009   #2
Put the names of books in italics:

...proceedings in Reginald Rose's 12 Angry Men

So, your thesis statement is that although they took place in different time periods, they are similar in that justice was achieved because of the time and place both took place, through the reviewing of evidence and through the use of reasonable doubt.

That is a complicated thesis. As I look through the rest of the essay, I think that you can rewrite the thesis to really capture the truth of the essay in a simpler way. Can you make that sentence shorter and easier to read?

And don't state the obvious: The reviewing of evidence and testimonies by the juries in both cases played a major role in reaching a fair verdict. That is what juries are supposed to do, so it seems that you are not writing anything meaningful in that part...

I wish you could say something more meaningful about the juries. What inner conflicts were common to the juries being compared. What inner conflicts were different? What circumstances were similar or different. Most importantly, what insightful conclusion can you draw from considering these similarities and differences? Try to fix that thesis, and then fix the conclusion paragraph to match it. :)
OP SeanMasih 2 / 5  
Feb 13, 2009   #3
Thank You.

I will get on that right away.
EF_Sean 6 / 3460  
Feb 17, 2009   #4
If you are going to use 12 Angry Men as the text, you need to find a trial where one of the jurors wrote about the jury deliberations afterward. Otherwise, it will be difficult to compare the fictional trial to the real one. If you had chosen to use To Kill a Mockingbird, you could compare the trial itself to the real trial of McVeigh. For that matter, don't the assignment instructions specifically ask you to compared the trials, rather than the deliberations that followed them? As it stands, your essay seems to ramble a lot because you are trying to compare two somewhat different things, a trial with a set of deliberations.


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