Comprehensive Note on ' The impossible is often the untried'

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Here is Comprehensive note on;

THE IMPOSSIBLE IS OFTEN THE UNTRIED

Nature blessed the human with unimagined power: the will to conquer the universe, the desire to know, and the curiosity of the unknown. The word impossible does not match with human nature has amply evident by global history.

The history of civilization exemplifies that humanity in his journey from the Bronze Age to the Modern times brought changes by continuously trying to improve their means of living.The human discoveries and invention are result of the continue efforts.

European never tried to discover the new sea routes to India and China until 14 century. The circumstance changes with change of Political Power in Mediterranean Region. The European Started to send expedition to discover the new trade route to India, and their continuous effort at last rewarded. They discover the new route to India through Cape of Hope, and also the new spectrum of knowledge during expedition that led to discovery of New World.Before then it was impossible because they never tried to discover to new route.

When we think about any matter as impossible, then it really is impossible, because we are not trying to make it possible. When we change our attitude and try to make it possible. Then it does not remain impossible.

Nature blessed the human with unimagined power: the will to conquer the universe, the desire to know, and the curiosity of unknown.


This is a little wordy and awkward. Let me suggest a rewording:
"If our ancestors had ignored their imaginations and simply believed everything was impossible, many of the commodities we have would not exist." You could probably to something better :)

I see that you need to work on your grammar a lot. Many of the sentences here do not make sense grammatically and are confusing.

"Their constant efforts become fruitful and civilization -has we have today accumulates, little by little, their toil...
Human have every thing from communication to transportation system or political and economy system by continuous trying to make it work for them. The problem that we think it is impossible, its problem with our attitude."

For example, a lot of the statements here are awkwardly worded fragments and/or run-ons:
"Their constant efforts becomebecame fruitful and civilization -has we have today accumulates, little by little, their toil...and developed the civilizations we have today.

By persevering and endlessly trying to solve new problems, h umans have achieved every thing from communication toand transportation system orto political and economy ical systemsocietiesby continuous trying to make it work for them . The problem that we thinkis not that it is impossible, its; the problem withis our attitude."

Asides from the grammar, I think you should add more details on how exactly the "impossible" means the "untried." So far, you have a few examples of the achievements of imagination, etc, but you don't specifically address how the impossible is the untried... do you understand what I mean?

Nice! Simpler really is better. It is easier for the writer and for the reader, so it enables the reader to have a powerful experience. That may be why Stephen King encourages brevity and simplicity, and why Hemingway is famous for it.

I will help with these sentences below. I hope you practice typing them 10 times the correct way, and think about the meaning:

We think about any matter is impossible than it is impossible because we are not trying to make it possible. When we change our attitude and try how to make it possible. Then it does not remain impossible.

When we think about any matter as impossible, then it really is impossible, because we are not trying to make it possible. When we change our attitude and try to make it possible. Then it does not remain impossible.

Their constant efforts become fruitful and civilization -has we have today accumulates, little by little, their toil.
Their constant efforts become fruitful, and little by little civilization benefits because of their toil. (in this sentence, "benefits" is used as a verb.)

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