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The content of the Internet controlled by a single powerful global agency?



chucnt 6 / 18  
Oct 2, 2014   #1
Imagine that the content of the Internet were controlled by a powerful global agency comparable to the United Nations. Explain the possible ADVANTAGES and/or DISADVANTAGES of such a system.

The content of the Internet controlled by a single powerful global agency comparable to the United Nations would provide many benefits as well as drawbacks. Controlling internet is adopted in many countries due to its social stability, but it has its advantages and disadvantages.

Censorship of powerful global agency has some benefits. Firstly, one of these benefits is that when this system is implemented, it would be adopted and accepted by all nations. In this way, all flow information, which is published or broadcasted or omitted, is being exclusively insisted to protect any disorder including cyberspace and investigate cybercrime... Secondly, powerful global agency would create community and reduce conflict between its members by the final authority of what content is permitted on the Internet. It would make equality in our constantly changing world, which has big gap between developed and developing countries. For instance, third world dependence on first world sources media programming and technologies was a sensitive political use.

In contrary, the control of GPA on the content of internet in comparison with United Nations has some disadvantages. Firstly, once internet is controlled by one organization, its monopoly regulation restricted and monitored internet that meet their political requirement. Imagine that China, which was "thumbnail" of powerful global agency, restricted social media like Facebook, Google... For instance, both China and Russia sold other countries technology for monitoring and filtering the internet. In addition, when information is regulated, that means, there is not free exchange of information and ideas that foster collaboration and advances in science and technology.

In conclusion, attempts at censorship have been mostly unsuccessful. People have free will and free thought. They have morals and make conscious decisions about what they do. I think the problems outweigh the benefits.

I really appreciate your help!

vangiespen - / 4077  
Oct 2, 2014   #2
The content of the Internet controlled by a single powerful global agency comparable to the United Nations would provide many benefits as well as drawbacks. Controlling internet is adopted in many countries due to its social stability, but it has its advantages and disadvantages.

- A stronger introduction is in order prior to your introducing the essay prompt. You need to slide the reader into this by saying something like "The internet is a place where information is freely shared. No single country or organization can claim to control the internet. That is not to say that countries have not tried to control the internet from within their borders. We can only imagine what it would be like if there is a single powerful global energy similar to the United Nations that controlled the internet. I bet that there would be tremendous drawbacks and disadvantages with minimal advantages in such a scenario. This paper will seek to discuss these positive and negative effects of having one organization control the internet.

Censorship of powerful global agency has some benefits. Firstly, one of these benefits is that when this system is implemented, it would be adopted and accepted by all nations. In this way, all flow information, which is published or broadcasted or omitted, is being exclusively insisted to protect any disorder including cyberspace and investigate cybercrime... Secondly, powerful global agency would create community and reduce conflict between its members by the final authority of what content is permitted on the Internet. It would make equality in our constantly changing world, which has big gap between developed and developing countries. For instance, third world dependence on first world sources media programming and technologies was a sensitive political use.

- Having a single organization in charge of the internet would mean a uniform method by which people will access the internet. That is a definite advantage. The organization can also help to reduce the cyberspace conflict between people in a constantly changing world.

- You have to rethink some of the reasons your stated in this paragraph. Most of what you said is considered to be a disadvantage by most countries and users fighting for freedom on the internet. Try to find other more believable advantages.

In contrary, the control of GPA on the content of internet in comparison with United Nations has some disadvantages. Firstly, once internet is controlled by one organization, its monopoly regulation restricted and monitored internet that meet their political requirement. Imagine that China, which was "thumbnail" of powerful global agency, restricted social media like Facebook, Google... For instance, both China and Russia sold other countries technology for monitoring and filtering the internet. In addition, when information is regulated, that means, there is not free exchange of information and ideas that foster collaboration and advances in science and technology.

- This reasoning is already old and tired. It is common knowledge that people are highly familiar with. In order to make your essay unique and believable, you need to come up with more recent information against having a GPA in charge of the internet. Perhaps talk in terms of violated privacy issues and the like. China and Russia are old news.
Vns9x 102 / 230  
Oct 2, 2014   #3
You have a short introduction, try to prolong it with some vague information that related to body paragraphs!
OP chucnt 6 / 18  
Oct 3, 2014   #4
Thanks a lot :)


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