There has been much controversy
You are altering the original statement. There is no controversy. There is only a statement of fact. This is a prompt deviation that will lead to your failing the Task Accuracy section, since you are not properly restating the original idea in your presentation.
The opening statement is also problematic in the sense that you failed to use the 3 sentence requirement for the paragraph. Writing a run-on sentence will not help you achieve a passing score, it only aids in making you fail the TA criteria. Your essay will start off with a preliminary failing score. It may not be able to recover towards a passing score.
advantageous because the health of the residents is more important than top athletes.
You are not properly responding the the question. You are being asked if this is a positive or negative development. That discussion is different from the advantage and disadvantage type of discussion. Expect to get The lowest possible TA score because you are not responding in the expected format and as such, cannot be given a passing score for the prompt restatement + Writer's opinion section. The essay will have already failed even before the rest of the essay has been scored based on other scoring considerations.