CREATING PELLETS - the sawdust passes three physical process and two temperature treatments

The flow chart reveals how to make wood pellets in order to heat the buildings. Overall, there are two forms of wood before being pellets. It is also essential to note that the sawdust passes three physical process and two temperature treatments to create pellets.

To begin with, sawmill's waste form is changed two times. The first, sawdust is an original material then it becomes smaller form which is fibers. After several treatments, they turn to be pellets. Nest, the pellets are packaged to bags for marketing.

Interestingly, to create pellets there are three physical treatments which are hammering, forcing, and vacuuming, while the temperature-control treatments are also needed in which dampening and cooling are part of them. Move to more detail analysis, the first process, sawdust passes hammering to create smaller forms and then fibers formed and they dampened with steam. Furthermore, they are forced to become pellets. To produce the final product of pellets, preservation is needed in order to make them ready to be sold. The fresh pellets then are cooled to make them durable. The last process is to do vacuuming and packaging the pellets to specific weight and cover. Most of the time, pellets are put into bags which have increase-capacity about 40 pound or 18 kilo of pellets per bag to be released to the market.

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Good. However, you need to present this in formal tone. Let me give a try; an illustration of manufacturing wood pellets using either pellet stoves or pellet furnaces and how it works to heat buildings is presented in this flow chart. Overall, the process of production for wood pellets takes several simple steps. This begins with the arrival of sawdust from sawmill and then ends with the distribution of pellets for sales.


Since no suprising data is presented, I suggest avoiding this phrase.

Hope this helps, eddy suaib

Paddoo, WELCOME to EssayForum, you are yet another member of the ever- growing EF Family.

Now, I'll make a few enhancement on your essay if needed, here it is;

- The flow chart reveals how to make wood pellets in order to heat the buildings. I'm not sure what you mean on this sentence, I suggest re-phrasing

- Overall, there are two forms of wood before beingbecoming pellets.

- NestNext , the pellets are packaged to bags for marketing.

There you have it, Paddoo, very minor corrections from my end.

However, when writing, mind the following;

- verb form
- sentence construction
- proof read

Overall, your analysis is good, it's written well, detailed as needed and required.

Keep it up.

Keep writing

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