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Crime in urban areas of America - rough draft



ameyer149 1 / -  
Jul 18, 2014   #1
Why is gun violence more likely to occur in urban areas?

Generally, gun violence in America is posed as an urban problem.

There are many contributing factors to gun related violence in any

area but large poor urban centers have the highest rates of murders

and acts of violence by gun and are often portrayed as areas of

breeding crime and violence. Disadvantage in urban communities

tends to be the leading cause of gun violence and crime.

One major issue is extreme poverty in urban areas combined

with higher costs of living (urban education). Lack of employment

in urban areas tends to be the root cause of poverty. Higher

unemployment rates increase poverty, which leads to more crime

due to depression associated with being unemployed. Poverty can

lead to high levels of stress that can result in individuals

committing theft, robbery and other violent acts. (poverty and

crime). The desperation that comes with poverty eventually gives

rise to anger and forces

people to take extreme steps, making them get involved in

criminal activities. In fact, a large number of individuals take to

crime to satiate their never-ending craving for money.

The lack of education in urban areas contributes to the increased

crime rate. Lack of employment stems from a lack of education.

School is not a possibility for those whose families don't make

enough to provide even the bare essentials. As a result, few

progress. Overcrowded classrooms, outdated and meager

resources, run down buildings and insufficient funding

play a major role in the reason education is so poor in urban

schools (urban education). As a result of these factors, teachers are

discouraged from working in these schools and a lack of quality

teachers affects a students achievement. Without proper education,

the possibility of being able to earn a decent income is very

unlikely. As a result, individuals will resort to committing crime.

Students who do not finish high school are more likely to

be unemployed. In studies, the graduation rate has been estimated

to be anywhere from 66% to 88% in non urban schools. In urban

schools, it's estimated to be from 50% to 80% in recent years.

(dropout rates)

Another significant reason for gun violence in urban

communities is gang affiliation. "Most gangs are part of the urban,

inner city and many families in these areas suffer from bleak

unemployment, violence and disparity" (crime causes). Social

disorganization in many urban communities leads to

the decline in housing, employment opportunities and school. An

education becomes less important because of the bleak

employment outlook. Therefore, school is seen as unimportant.

Gang activities tend to pull members away from any attachment,

commitment or involvement in school activities. Gang related

crimes account for over half of the crimes committed in urban

communities. Of those, over 80% were conducted with illegally

obtained firearms consisting of crimes ranging from murder,

robbery, theft and assault. In addition, gangs allow young people

from low economic areas with few legitimate employment

opportunities the ability to make money from illegitimate

opportunities like drug selling, robberies and even

burglaries. The final reason as to why crime is more likely to occur

in urban centers is a lack of family value. Often, people growing

up on urban areas come from broken homes or do not have stable

family support. "If you grow up not having family support such as

not having both a mother and father you are more likely to be

involved in criminal action". (disorganized urban areas). When

children have little or no family support they are not taught

right from wrong from their parents and they feel they need to get

support elsewhere, such as gangs. If family values aren't

established at a young age by parents, children will most likely

grow up not knowing the differences between good and bad.

In conclusion, crime and violence can and does occur just

about anywhere. However, studies have proved that crime occurs

more often in urban areas. There are many reasons and

explanations for committing crime. The common factors that urban

communities share is economic struggle, unemployment rates,

poor education and lack of family values.

Hiruni 3 / 10  
Jul 26, 2014   #2
teachers affects a studentsstudent's achievement. Without proper education,

the possibility of being able to earn a decent income is very

unlikely.


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